The love of my life

Very sweet...one major typo...(hwat...?) but still good.
 
Very good It is a very good poem indeed, all you need to do though is work on the spelling a bit but other than that it's great.
 
Indeed. Nice poem.
Ah, amore... isnt it...
Annoying at times e.O
O.O I meant WONDERFUL!
Seriously... >.>
 
that's good!! quite sweet! very good ! 10 marks for you
 
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