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Name: Fraky
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Description: Fraky is a middle-sized boy, with black long hair, brown eyes, a short nose and a mysterious look in his face. He's a strong-willed boy of few words. Wears a green cloak, a black shirt and black boots all the time. Has a good strength on his arms, and he's very intelligent and smart, too.
Personality: Fraky always fights for good, but it's not for being a bit mysterious that he doesn't like a joke. He is always ready to help a friend when he needs. When facing a problem, he does everything to solve it calmly, but when facing an enemy, he acts aggressively, and loves all his Steel-Type Pokémon. He likes surfing, cycling and battling, but hates evil and cheese :)
History: Fraky was born in Oldale Town. He came from a poor family, so, when he was 8, he promised he would be a great trainer to earn money for his family. When he was a little kid, he was always playing with toys or playing with his friends. When he was 10, he received his first Pokémon, a Bronzor. Steel-types fascinated him all his life, so he was very happy. Then, he went to Rustboro, to start his adventure.
Pokemon: Bronzor, Magnemite, Budew, Shieldon
Pokemon who would be your Mystic Pokemon: Bronzor
Legendary Pokemon that your Mystic Pokemon ancestor was learn from: Cresselia
RPG Sample:
Fraky was on his way to Rustboro. Everything was calm, the sea was calm, the weather was good... But then a wild Budew appeared.
"A Budew?" - Fraky thinked.
He liked Steel-types, but there is a Pokémon that he admires that isn't a Steel-type: Roserade. So, he was going to catch this Budew.
"Ok, Budew, here I come. Go, Bronzor!" - yelled Fraky, sending his Bronzor.
Bronzor came out. - "Bronzor!"
Fraky told it: - "Bronzor, we're going to catch that Budew!"
"Bronzor! Bron!" - said Bronzor.
That Budew was ready to battle. Fraky said: - "Bronzor, use Confusion!"
"Bronzor!" - said Bronzor, using Confusion.
It was a super-effective move, because Budew is a Poison-type too. But Budew didn't give up and used Bullet Seed.
"Budew!" - it said, using Bullet Seed.
That Bullet Seed hit Bronzor with a great strength. Bronzor wasn't OHKO'd, but was severly damaged.
Fraky said: - "Bronzor, use Confusion again!"
"Bronzor" - it used Confusion again. This time, Budew became confused.
"Bud-Budew-dew" - said Budew, spinning like a drunk man.
"Go, POKEBALL!" - Fraky launched a Pokeball.
The Pokéball shaked for a bit, then stopped. He caught that Budew. Then, a trainer came out.
"Hey, it isn't fair, I was after that Budew!" - he said.
"Really? I'm sorry, but now this Budew is mine." - Fraky replied.
"I'm not challenging you because my Zigzagoon is fainted, but next time you're going down!"
That trainer went away. Fraky earned a rival. Then, he continued going on to Rustboro, to have a nap.
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