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The New and Improved Nozomi Fanclub

Yeah I need help, Im trying to write a poem for the PC January poetry contest, and so far I have 2 ideas, both of which are coming up empty.
 
The chances are like 0,000000000000000000000000000000000018% Well I exaggerated more like 0.1% chance but still theres no way he would. Of course I still think you should pick Midwing, cause he'll jump into a bin of nuclear chicken waste if you don't
 
I just read over the last page, and now Im mad at Wooty. Actually Im always mad at Wooty, so nothing is new. GOd I miss Chika so much, ye'know she'd vouch for me over Azonic, she did apir both of us. Well if she was still hrere and I was trying to paiur you she probably wouldn;t vouch for me... Ok my brain is chewing on itself, and who would turn down Gongon?

No I wouldn;t I would be fine stupid.
 
UM, well anyways Spencer had to go for dinner, he'll probabley be back though.

And if you can't decide Kaydee, just ask the mer people, they're great with this sort of stuff.

Edit: O looks my dinner's ready too, I'll try to come back on. Byeyas.
 
xD I think I'll ask the Ninja Neko. They know what to do ^^

I think I'm going to change my name to Ninja Neko in March. I was gonna do Lawliet Neko, but Ninja rawk.
 
Neko-chan said:
xD I think I'll ask the Ninja Neko. They know what to do ^^

I think I'm going to change my name to Ninja Neko in March. I was gonna do Lawliet Neko, but Ninja rawk.
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Couldn't agree more with the new name choice. I probably won't change my name any time soon. I can't really think of anything.
 
I think you should Ninja Gongon, since you;re still Gongon. But whatever. But I do need your expert opinion (Im not sure if you're an expert, but you can help anyways) Actually you can hlp too classicrock.
 
Ok which of these stanzas sounds better?

Poem Name-Black and White World (This has nothing to do with anything related to skin color BTW)

Welcome to Our
Black and White World
Our Old
Black And white World
Where stoplights turn from gray to gray
And no one notices them stay the same
And people walk with heads down low
The constant lifeless human flow

And this one is

Poem Name:Angel of the North Wind

The Angel of the North Wind Glides
Icicles dripping off starlit wings
Above glassy frozen lakes, like eyes
Or fallen friends and downed allies
In winds of blistering snow, little life
Like tears of the cold spirits of passed
 
Well ya, Black and White World does sound like a song (though somethign My Chemical Romance would sing) I think I like the second one cause you used words like starlit wings, frozen lakes and eyes.
Which well, you know.

They're both good.

I'd enter a random (excuse for a) poem about waffles if Oni Pichu didn't scare me.
 
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