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Okay post xxlucifera it was very descriptive though so thats a plus. Just in the future make your post a bit longer please. Now go ahead and head into the pokemon center and recieve your pokemon.
 
as nate walked with a large clothe over his mouth and covering his body "is this the city phenac its pretty large"Nate said as walked into the city as he walked he looked and venture through the city"Hump..First thing first i think ill go to the pokemon center" he walked for minutes and then he saw the greatest thing he had ever seen a coliseum "Woah i think iam gonna like this place"Nate said staring and walking in aww towards the coliseum as he walked inside he looked like a normal tourist amazed by

almost everything
He asked a trainer about the coliseum"Excused me but whats this coliseum about"Nate asked welled after getting most of the information from the trainer"You should probably head up to the Pokemon Center i think you get most of the info there" The trainer said to him"Okay thanks"Nate said as he walked out "Iam definitely coming back here"Nate said as he walked out as he walked out of the coliseum he begin searching for a building with a giant pokeball on it "its around here somewhere"Nate thought then he spotted it he started walking up to it,He walked inside and sat down then a researcher walked up to him"excuse me sir are you here to compete in the Orre gym battle" The researcher said smiling at him,Nate stood up and held his hand out for him to shake it.

The researcher shook his hand nate begin to scratch his hair "Hey i think why not " Nate said thinking about The researcher started walking down to the basement of the pokeball of the center,as nate walked down he begin to see many trainers down there of all kinds shape and sizes "Woah " Nate sat down beside a girl that looked Cool and athletic "Ummm hey do you know what all this is about" Nate asked her The girl turned around "well hey dont everybody" She asked nate,"not me "Nate said "Well basically the pokemn league is opening here in the Orre region everybody here to compete in it" She said "Woah a new league i can compete, SHOOOT but i need a pokemon.Man iam out of luck" Nate said putting his head down the girl looked at him "No you arnt don t knowbody here have there first Pokemon yet" The girl said than a man walks into the room, He has gray spiky hair and wears goggles on his head. He looks about 20 years and had a very optimistic smile upon his face. You also notice that an Umbreon and Espeon walk around his legs " why those pokemon are so cool"nate though to himself.

Than he said "Good Morning to you all, I hope the trip here was a very great experience for you." "why this guy has a sorta aura around him i feel drawn to listen to him " nate thought to himself than he resume to say "My name is Tim, I am the one who started the league here and I will be the one to give you your pokemon." he begin to wave a young women into the room with a carton of pokeballs he resume to say "As you all know Orre was the place where the shadow pokemon outbreak took place, but I promise you that it is all in the past,thanks to me and another great trainer who is a gym leader here. Now you will each come up here and take a pokeball, they are all labeled so you will know what pokemon you are getting. I will also give you five pokeballs, pokedex, and a map. After receiving your pokemon you will head out through Phenac City and head to Pyrite Town where the first gym is located. I wish you all luck and just so you know, the person who beats all of the gym leaders and wins his/her way through the Orre League Tournament will face me to become the greatest trainer in Orre, and possibly the world. Now lets get this started!" then afterward nate sees him wave to get his pokeball hump he waited for everybody else to get there cause he didnt want to get caught into the crowd "Finally this is my pokeball" Nate said walking up to the pokeball on it said cydaquil "cool i hope his nice Cydaquil come on out" as nate said that he throw the pokeball in the air than a cydaquil came out "Cynda.....Cyndaquillll" cydaquil than he walked up in started rubbing his head on his leg.

After gaining Cyndaquil trust which wasnt hard he than rest a night at the hotel after he woke his next plan was to head to Pyrite Town "Iam going to be the best i know i can"Nate said as walked out the hotel along with Cydaquil walking along him.
 
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nice post Yamagi. I like you stated everything you saw and the colliseum. Now go onto post 2 and try and seperate things into paragraphs please.

Nate obtained a level 5 Cyndaquil
 
Post 1.1


Yuki was staring out of the window of the plane he was on heading towards the Orre region. He sighed, "I am so bored this is the longest flight I have ever been on!" This was true, albeit it was the first time Yuki had ever flown, but still this was taking forever! He just sighed again and pulled a notebook out of his black backpack, which he carried everywhere with him. He opened the notebook up to the first page, taking out a pencil he suddenly felt a lot better; he loved the feeling of filling up a new notebook. Yuki had the habit of carrying one with him at all times and whenever a thought or a plot for a story struck him he would start to write at blazing speed, he figured if he went to slowly the idea would leave him.
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page 1, Adventure in the Orre Region, notebook 1


So far this is not the adventure I had thought it would be. Let me rephrase that, so far everything here sucks! I have been on this freakin plane for 2 hours now! The in-flight movie is, to say the least, the worst movie I have ever seen...I am not a movie critic for the "Johto Tribune" but seriously this movie should never have been made!....

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The pilot came over the loudspeaker, "we will be landing in the beautiful Phenac City in about 5 minutes, so please strap in and pack up any belongings." Yuki sighed as he put the notebook in his backpack, "well I guess this most wonderful and adventure filled flight is over," he muttered to himself. He sat down and strapped in, absently he rolled his pokeball necklace around in his hand, "soon, very soon, this pokeball will hold a real pokemon in it and I can finally start my journey!" He just shook his head and waited for the plane to land.

Yuki had heard that Phenac was a beautiful place but when he saw it he could hardly believe his eyes. At the middle of this large city stood a huge fountain that seemed to be the place to be in Phenac City. To the left of the fountain was a mart, where trainers went to buy pokeballs, potions, antidotes, etc..., and to the right of the fountain was the Pokemon Center. Yuki pulled the postcard he had been sent, it said he needed to go to the center first. He sighed and adjusted his backpack and headed towards the building.


Yuki entered the center and saw the usual PC sitting in the corner, but standing there as if waiting for someone was a man in a white lab coat. He walked over to Yuki and said, "I assume you are Yuki from Johto?" Yuki was a bit nervous and replied in an almost too loud voice, "yes I am." The man scoffed at him and calmly said, "if you wouldn't mind, could you use your inside voice?" Yuki laughed nervously at this, "anyways come along we have not got all day for small talk you know!" The man led Yuki to a flight of stairs heading down, "head straight down and have a seat." Yuki nodded and he headed down.


He was shocked to discover that it was not a basement, but it seemed to be a normal pokemon lab! He sat in one of the chairs near the middle of the room. He turned and looked at the person next to him, it was a girl about the same age as Yuki, she had golden-blonde hair and icy blue eyes. She was wearing a shirt that said, "stop "reading" my shirt already" and a skirt that was a little on the short side. "Do you have a staring problem or something?" She asked, jerking Yuki out of his trance, "I...wha....no...m....Yuki?" He replied, "so I see you are a artist with words, you almost paint a picture in my mind with your extensive vocabulary..." She said with a wink, "Oh and the names Cassie...Nice to meet you Yuki!" Yuki held out his hand and Cassie shook it. They talked for a little while about where they were from and why they were here and about other random things. It turns out Cassie came from the Johto Region as well, although she lived in New Bark Town, Yuki was from Azela Town. Their conversation was interrupted when a man in about his 20's walked in with an Espeon and Umbreon at his heels.


"Good Morning to you all, I hope the trip here was a very great experience for you." (at this Yuki let out a small unaudiable groan) He starts out. "My name is Tim, I am the one who started the league here and I will be the one to give you your pokemon." (same old newbie trainer thing,Yuki thought to himself) Tim stated to the beginning trainers as he waved somebody into the room. A young girl comes out with a cart of pokeballs and Tim introduces her as his assistant. Tim than begins to speak again, "As you all know Orre was the place where the shadow pokemon outbreak took place, but I promise you that it is all in the past thanks to me and another great trainer who is a gym leader here. Now you will each come up here and take a pokeball, they are all labeled so you will know what pokemon you are getting. I will also give you five pokeballs, pokedex, and a map. After receiving your pokemon you will head out through Phenac City and head to Pyrite Town where the first gym is located. I wish you all luck and just so you know, the person who beats all of the gym leaders and wins his/her way through the Orre League Tournament will face me to become the greatest trainer in Orre, and possibly the world. Now lets get this started!" Tim says as he waves you up to receive your pokemon.


Cassie walked to up to the cart and took one of the two pokeballs on it and threw it, a Torchic came out of with a cry of "Tor!!" She returned the pokemon to it's ball and went back to her seat. Yuki walked over to the cart and picked up his pokemon and let it out. A small green creature with a neacklace of beads around it's neck and a leaf coming out of it's head appeared, "Chiko!" Yuki just looked at it for a minute and then he bent down and said to the Chikorita, "hi I am Yuki, I am going to be your trainer from now on, of that's ok with you." The Chikorita nodded and started to do a little jig on the spot...Yuki could tell this was the start of something great....
 
Name: Sam Far
Pokemon: Turtwig!
Region your from orignally: Hoenn!
Attitude: Sam is a friendly guy, but a lot of the time, he can seem rather rough, due to a rather...strange experience from his childhood.
Appearance: Sam is a fairly good looking guy. He has chesnut brown hair and blue eyes. His clothes are mostly red, in honor of his hero...
History: Sam grew up in Littleroot Town honoring the professor there. In this time, he learned a lot about pokemon.
Reason for coming to Orre: Sam came to Orre to learn about pokemon more and master another frontier for Littleroot.
 
It had been several hours since Zypher had left his team with Prof. Oak, and now headed on his way towards the Orre region, where a brand new League had just been set up. The boat ride there wasn't going to well for Zypher, he wasn't to found of boats, and wish he had his Blastoise to ride on.

"Ahh I hope they understand why I left them behind, after coming in Second in Johto and fourth in Kanto, I need a fresh start, but this time i'm going to win it all" Zypher said to himself as the boat finally landed and he would know have to walk abit to reach his destination of Phenac City.

On the walk there Zyph noticed many things different about the Orre region, it just wasn't the same as Johto and Kanto for some reason. Finally he arrived and headed into the pokemon center. A man in a white coat cam up asking for his name, and if he was registerd for the Orre league.

"Yes I am, and the name is Zypher" Zyph said as the man lead him down to a staircase where he was told to wait with a bunch of different people. Zyph didn't enjoy big crowds of people very much, he was shy and hated getting to know people. So he kinda ignored everyone else.

"Hey so did you guys hear the stories of the shadow pokemon incident that happened here a few years ago?" One boy asked another as Zyph couldn't help but listen in.

"Yeah I heard something about an evil organization that turned pokemon into shadows or something to make them stronger, it happened twice, and once Tim saved Orre from them" The other boy said.

"So this Tim guy must be a pretty good trainer" Zypher said to himself as A man about two years older then himself walked in wearing goggles on his head. He also had an Umbreon and an Espeon following hims.

The man stopped and looked at the crowd of trainers "Good Morning to you all, I hope the trip here was a very great experience for you." He starts out. "My name is Tim, I am the one who started the league here and I will be the one to give you your pokemon." Tim stated

"Hmm so this is Tim, I bet I could have beat him if I had my team with me.. oh well i'm just excited for the new challenge" Zyph said under his breath. A young lady then came out carrying a tray of pokeballs and introducing herself as Tims lab assistant, she then started handing out everyones pokemon and she finally arrived at Zypher.

"You must be Zypher well here is your pokemon, and good luck in the league" She said smiling as she handed him his pokeball.

To eagar to wait till he got outside he threw out the pokeball to see what pokemon he had recieved. A small orange looking dinosaur with a flame on his tail popped out of the ball.

"CHar-charmander" the pokemon shouted.

"Sweet I got a charmander" Zypher shouted as he then returned it to it's pokeball and the proceded out of the center.
 
As Nate and Cyndaquil walked out of Phanec city they begin to wander if the barren wasteland in front of them was the true route to Pyrite City. As he looked out upon it he turned to and looked at Cyndaquil "So you ready buddy from now on its me in you " Cyndaquil looked up "Cynda.....Cynda..Cyndaquil" They begin to walk onto the desert.

Three hours have pasted by now as they walked down the desert they believe they made humanly figure out of the sand."a buddy looks...like there somebody else out here ..huh"
"Go Onix Tackle attack" a mysterious figure said then a Onix came from nowhere and smash its rocky tails on the sandy ground.They jumped back and looked at each other
"Ok Cyndaquil Get ready for a battle buddy" Nate said as pointed to the Onix.Cyndaquil back then fired up with such intensity. The Onix then let out a giant roar it shook the entire ground.

"Hummp Your puny Cyndaquil cant beat my Onix " a little kid appeared from the smoke "get ready Onix tackle attack. then the Onix burst through the sand charging strait for Cyndaquil and Nate. They ran to the left and as the Onix charge for them they jumped to the left and barely missed The Onix that hit the rock behind them. "Okay Cyndaquil now use Smokescreen" Nate said to Cayndaquil.then a black smoke spewed out of the Cyndaquil mouth covering the enitre area of the battle. Onix confused and blind begin to thrash around in the smoke.Raising up a giant cloud of sand.Covering his eyes form the cloud of sand "Cyndaquil us tackle attack "Cyndaquil jumped and raised above the smokescreen.lowered its head straight for Onix thrashing in the ground he then charged at the Onix and hit him right on his head.The Onix begin to become drowsy and then fell to the ground.

A red strike of energy hit the Onix and then return it to the pokeball"Onix return Hummp you was better than i thought you was" the boy said as he walked up to Nate and Cyndaquil."You know you didn't have to attack us we were just going to Pyrite Town.He begin to walk the opposite direction"Arn't we all".After a while the kid left."huh looks like we still have a long ways to before getting to pyrite city" Nate said as he continued to walk.
 
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Hiro had arrived in the region of Orre not to long ago... He had arrived at the Phenac City Pokemon Center, talked to some freak in a white robe, and even checked out some of Phenac City's landmarks, including the coliseum, of which grabbed his attention the most of all! Hiro was sitting down, barely listening to Tim's little speech. He was obviously bored, and didn't really care to hear what Tim was saying. All he knew was that he was excited to recieve his very first pokemon, and begin his quest.

He was extremely eager, and all that was on his mind was Piplup. He could hardly stand to listen any longer. In the midst of his various miscellaneous thoughts Hiro hadn't realized that Tim had completed his speech, and nearly everyone had left to begin already! He arose from his seat and began walking out of the building. For someone so anxious he was walking pitifully slow.
He was stopped, however, by the young girl he noticed which was Tim's assistant. She held out a pokeball to Hiro.

"I noticed you just walked out of the building without even obtaining your pokemon! Shows how much attention you were paying to Tim!" The young girl exclaimed. Hiro stared for a second, somewhat embarrased at what just occured. He grabbed the pokeball, looked towards the sky, and turned around. He started to walk off again.

".... Thanks". Hiro popped a quick, cool grin at the girl, and turned again, continuing to walk towards the city limits, to begin what would become one of the greatest adventures of the young rookie pokemon trainer's life.
 
Stepping through the city gates, Enigma was impressed at the radical change in the city walls. Water was abundant, and trees were seen growing off to the sides of paths. Quite a welcome change from the harsh dessert. Enigma's stomach roared, reminding him of the demanding diet he had been forced to endure-partly his fault- and scanned the area,looking for a place to eat. His eyes were drawn to a huge, looming building in the distance.

"Coliseum caught your eye?" A scratchy voice said, not far behind Enigma. With a questioning grunt, he turned, to see an old man, leaning dependently on a cane. His gray hair hung loosely around his shoulders, free of the balding curse. His crisp khaki pants were worn higher up than what was "in" now, and he wore a nice, white shirt under a yellow wool sweater vest.

Enigma nodded, "That's the coliseum...?" He stared back up at the looming shape, eyes wide in awe, "wow"

"Aye, that it is" The man said, "Impressive, is it not?"

"Yes, sir," Enigma replied, "Very".

The old man chuckled, hoarsely, which resulted in a small attack of coughs. Enigma put his hand on the man, making sure he would be all right. After a few seconds, he looked up at Enigma, as the coughing ceased.

"Nice to see there are still some youngsters with respect for the elderly these days," The old man smiled at Enigma, "You have yourself the look of a trainer.. I remember the days when I wasn't too different from you. That was much before the shadow pokemon trouble, but I'm sure you know all about that. Ahem, I seem to be rambling.. Is there anything i can help you with while you're here? I'd be glad to show you around!"

"OH, yes, please" Enigma nodded," That would be very nice!"
The man led Enigma through the large, oasis-like city, pointing out various locations. Stores, restaurants, houses of important people, and, finally, they stopped at the pokemon center.

"And, this, I believe is your destination, is it not?"The man asked Enigma, smiling.

"Uh, yeah! Thanks.."Enigma said, slowly. He didn't want to be rude to the nice man, but he had been hoping to get a bite to eat first. He was horribly starved for food. But he could eat later. He thanked the old man again, and rushed inside.

He looked around the crowded room hastily, spotting a man in a white coat. seemed professional enough. He rushed forward, quickly squirming through the crowd to the man. He reached his destination shortly, though, not without a few distasteful remarks from grumpy citizens. He tapped the man on the shoulder, and informed him he was here for the Orre League. The man led him to a waiting area, and instructed him to take a seat.
 
Hiro was walking outside of Phenac City, travelling through Route 1, alongside his newly obtained Piplup. He looked down at the young penguin pokemon.

"So...You're a Piplup, eh? Nice... Nice... I like being a human myself." Hiro said to the Piplup, attempting to "bond" with his pokemon. The piplup gave Hiro a look where he seemingly said, "Please shut up.". Hiro quickly looked away, feeling that his conversation was not one that Piplup cared to partake in. He heard a voice exclaim to him.

"You! You're a trainer from Phenac City, aren't you?!" Hiro turned and saw some random kid approach him with a cap on his head and a pokeball firmly grasped in his hand. "I challenge you to a pokemon battle, kid!" The kid continued.

"If you insist," Hiro replied. "Go, show 'em what you can do, Piplup!"

"Show them how a true trainer does it! Go, Bidoof!" The kid released a beaver looking pokemon.

"Hey, Piplup. Do one of those flashy water moves I've seen you do on TV! What was it called... 'Tackle'!" Hiro ordered his pokemon to attack. Piplup looked away from Hiro, refusing to battle. "Piplup, what the hell are you doing?!" Hiro exclaimed.

"We'll do it! Bidoof, Tackle attack, let's go!" The kid ordered his pokemon to ram into Piplpup with such an intensity that Piplup flew into a boulder. Critical Hit! Piplup struggled to rise after recieving such a fatal blow.

"Y'know, any true trainer knows that Piplup can't learn Tackle attack! It knows Pound! How's THAT for a Trainer Tip?" The kid was obviously mocking Hiro. "Bidoof, Tackle!".

"Piplup! Dodge the attack before it hits you again!!" Hiro tried to persuade the Piplup to evade the attack, but it refused to listen, yet again, and was hit.

"Here's another tip for you, noobie. Piplup's are extremely prideful pokemon. That may be why it wouldn't listen. Plus this place is really the opposite of the habitat Piplup's are used to. Oh well." The kid continued to "teach" Hiro.

Hiro spoke up, "What do you mean wouldn't listen?" Hiro looked down and saw that Piplup had been knocked out.

"Aww crap!" Hiro paid out his losing fee and returned to Phenac City to recooperate his Piplup.

Thirty-Five Minutes Later...+++++++++++++++++++++++++

Hiro had returned to Route 1. He was feeling bad because of his recent loss. His first pokemon battle, and he had been defeated.

"This pokemon bites. I really should've picked a different pokemon. I need to at least capture a new one to replace the piece 'o work." Hiro noticed a little male Nidoran in the distance. "Here's my chance! A pokemon! Go! Pokeball!!!"

TO BE CONTINUED...!!!
 
A few hours later, Enigma left the doors of the pokemon center, A bulbasaur perched contently on his head, a lazy smile on its face. Tim had been a strange guy, but in a good way. He was easy to get along with, and told Enigma a lot about the shadow pokemon. He seemed confident that another outbreak wouldn't occur. But shouldn't they at least be wary? Just in case? Oh well, it wasnt for Enigma to worry about. He reached up, stroking Katarra, his bulbasaur.

"Hey, buddy, how about a bite to eat? Sound good?" Enigma said to the plantlike creature.

"Bulbaaaa!"

"I guess that'll be a yes!" Enigma said, laughing softly, as he searched his memory, trying to remember some of the restaurants the old man had shown him. After a few minutes of wandering aimlessly, he found a suitable place.

"Buh Bulba!"

"Yeah, yeah, I'm starving, too," Enigma said, pulling the bulbasaur off his head and holding in on his left arm, "Let's see what they have for food here!"

The glass doors of the building slid open on noiseless hinges as Enigma made his way forward, silently closing behind him as he stepped inside.
 
OoC:By the way, I try to plan all the endings of my posts so that they are open for interaction from other characters [you all]. Also, I hate to get on your guys' case, but you could work a bit on your grammar. We're in a roleplay, and literacy is a real plus when in a text based roleplay.
Makes it easier on everyone else. And detail detail detail. We're all doing okay so far, but everyone, msyelf included, could kick it up a notch. Let's make this RP kick ass, guys!
 
xxlucifera said:
OoC:By the way, I try to plan all the endings of my posts so that they are open for interaction from other characters [you all]. Also, I hate to get on your guys' case, but you could work a bit on your grammar. We're in a roleplay, and literacy is a real plus when in a text based roleplay.
Makes it easier on everyone else. And detail detail detail. We're all doing okay so far, but everyone, msyelf included, could kick it up a notch. Let's make this RP kick ass, guys!
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OoC: Instead of making a generalized statement can you not just point out some mistakes some of us made. If one was made by me I would want you to point it out to me so I could correct it...If I did make one (I am sure I made more than one) by all means call me out on it...I am a beginner at RPs and constructive feedback would go a long way. So by all means (not just you either anyone) call me out on my mistakes :)..
 
yuki3056 said:
OoC: Instead of making a generalized statement can you not just point out some mistakes some of us made. If one was made by me I would want you to point it out to me so I could correct it...If I did make one (I am sure I made more than one) by all means call me out on it...I am a beginner at RPs and constructive feedback would go a long way. So by all means (not just you either anyone) call me out on my mistakes :)..
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OoC: I plan on doing that from now on, but i didnt want to dig back into every post and point out areas that could be worked on.
I'll try to keep up on that in the future, though.
 
"What?" Rick frantically looked around to see a world of blue around him, the sky a unanimous dark blue with the sea. "No signal", the words appearing instantly the second he pressed "START" on his Pokemon Station Portable. He was lost, and just in time for the rain to come down on him like Glameows and Poochyenas. Putting up the umbrella into the umbrella-slot he had (ingeniously) placed in the middle of his wooden boat, he had one final look around for a sign or a signal. "Great, we're gonna be stuck out here for a while, Squirt" he sighed looking down at the little snug shell pokemon sleeping below him, hoping that he was wrong. He wasn't and knowing that having Squirtle propel the boat in any direction was just as fruitless as calling out for help in the open sea, he decided to rest for the night. It'd be alright; he'd have Squirt and his PSP next to him, his best companions and his only companions. They were all he had after his grandmother passed away and his parents' victims of a collapse in the Granite cave. Closing his watery eyes and the window to the past he fell asleep.

He has awoken by the beeping danger signal of his PSP, the red beeper contrasting with the silver of the PSP. "What, is it already morning?" he asked his device, annoyed both by the beeping noise and the fact it wouldn't reply to him. But just as his dazy eyes adjusted in the darkness to bright PSP screen, he found out what it was trying to say to him.

Zaap!

Lightning, almost as strong as that from the Pikachu owned by the Legendary Ash Ketchum stuck the water near his boat frightening the Tentacool beneath him. Rick panicked by this unexpected incident decided to paddle aided by Squirtle who has also just awoken. And then the worst thing that can possibly happen happens, Squirt falls overboard and even though he is a water pokemon the sea is too strong and starts to pull him in.

"Squurrt" "Squirt" his thoughts are rushing "What do I do?, What do I do?"

"Squirt" Squirtle is desperately trying to reach Rick who is trying to reach him back

"Squi…" Richard makes his final desperate reach for his Squirtle and hits his head on the side of the boat and faints to the sight of his struggling Squirtle.
The world blurs around him…..
 
Seth had just made his way into Phenac City he had remembered the trip here it was long hard grueling and lonely. The trip had been filled with nothing, but a long narrow strip of dirt he had even fell down once or twice, and he had to climb a cliff to get back up to continue to Phenac which wasn't a small task, but thankfully he hadn't had ran out of food, and now he had made it to Phenac. Along the way to Phenac he had encountered others who were also coming to Phenac, but they still decided they'd go separate ways, but he still had made some friends in this alien region.

The city of Phenac had lush blue liquid all over it, but sense he had not ran out of food it didn't make him rejoice. He was gloomier than usual stressfully taking a seat at the pokemon center which had a chansey working behind the counter loading up the machine in order to heal a young trainer's pokemon which had a large cut across the torso the pokemon was an Ursaring, but was out cold. Chansey had finally loaded up the machine then soon after chansey was told this was an emergency. Nurse Joy and Chansey the proceeded to go into the ER to help the Ursaring. A man in a scrubs' uniform then appeared. He had a tan complexure, but that was all you could see. "Hello there are you hear to participate in the Orre league?" the man asked as he soon then continued. "You should down those stairs right there then." the man stated as he pointed his finger at the flight of stairs. "Thanks I will" Seth replied heading towards the stairs.

He had appeared in a room that looked like a basic lounge with several couches against the walls of the room. He took a seat next to a trainer that looked like his older brother Micheal, but Micheal decided to go to the Junsei region, so he knew he couldn't be his older brother then the trainer turned around, and said in surprise "Micheal what are you doing here?!". "I told I was competing in the Orre league didn't I Conner?" Seth said as he turned to his friend which he had met during his way here. "Oi, that you did" Conner said as he turned to the front of hearing the door open. The room which was bustling a minute ago was quiet like the silent night.

"Good Morning to you all, I hope the trip here was a very great experience for you." He starts out. "My name is Tim, I am the one who started the league here and I will be the one to give you your pokemon." Tim stated to the beginning trainers as he waved somebody into the room. A young girl comes out with a cart of pokeballs and Tim introduces her as his assistant. Tim than begins to speak again, "As you all know Orre was the place where the shadow pokemon outbreak took place, but I promise you that it is all in the past thanks to me and another great trainer who is a gym leader here. Now you will each come up here and take a pokeball, they are all labeled so you will know what pokemon you are getting. I will also give you five pokeballs, pokedex, and a map. After receiving your pokemon you will head out through Phenac City and head to Pyrite Town where the first gym is located. I wish you all luck and just so you know, the person who beats all of the gym leaders and wins his/her way through the Orre League Tournament will face me to become the greatest trainer in Orre, and possibly the world. Now lets get this started!" Tim says as he starts to choose who to come up. "How about you?" Tim said as he pointed to Conner to come up. Conner had chose a Treeko which was pretty happy to have Conner. "Now how about you?" Tim said as pointed to another trainer. He had slowly picked off every trainer that was there and now Seth was chosen. "I hope you want a Totodile that's the only one left" Tim said as he brought over to Seth his Totodile, five pokeballs, a Pokedex, and a map. "Thanks" Seth said as he picked up the items and headed out heading for Pyrite town.
 
Yuki great post I enjoyed reading it! Yuki recieved a lvl 5 Chikorita, x5 pokeballs pokedex, and a map.

Dboring good post! Zeypher recieved a lvl 5 charmander, x5 pokeballs, pokedex, and a map.

Yamagi good battle but please try and watch the grammar a tad bit lol. Your Cyndaquil grew to lvl 7...but your Cyndaquil doesn't know double team or ember yet. Please look at the OOC where I have everything posted. Also you should not be in Phenac City yet. You were supposed to stop your post while still on route 1. (Sorry if i didnt explain that good enough).

Xxlucifera good couple of post. I like how you described everything. Enigma got a lvl 5 Bulbasaur, x5 pokeballs, and a pokedex, also a map.

BeattheSpecialStage good couple of post also, I like how you showed that your character doesn't understand pokemon to well. Hiro obtianed a lvl 5 Piplup, x5 pokeballs, pokedex, and a map.

EvilShan I like how you made your trainer wind up in Orre...now since you already have your lvl 5 Squirtle(sorry if thats low for you but its what he has to start out at), please head to Phenac City and talk to Tim about obtaining registering for the Orre League.

RedBlaze good post, I like the twist with the brother thing. Seth recieved a lvl 5 Totodile, x5 pokeballs, a pokedex, and a map. Now post your second part.

Note: I would like to make sure you all check out the OOC for this RP (which is not up yet but will be soon, but im going by Platinum move sets) because it keeps track of your pokemon and their moves (which some of you messed up on.) Also i would appreciate if you wait for me to grade your post before you post again. And one last thing, make sure you when you end your second and final post for this chapter you havent reached Pyrite Town yet. I have something planned for the next chapter which takes place on the way to Pyrite Town. Alright thanks lol sorry for all the notes.
 
It had been a long and eventful day for Zypher, but he still had a smile on his face, especially now that he received his Charmander who he had now decided to call Blaze.

"Blaze come on out buddy" he said as a flash of light appeared out of the pokeball and Blaze stood there yawning.

"Charrrrrr--man---der!" Blaze shouted happily looking at it's new trainer.

"Well I can't just put you right back into your pokeball after letting you out, so why don't you travel beside me, now lets move" Zyph said as the two of them headed onto route 1 outside of Phenac town. As Zyph looked around he noticed that most of the route was desert area, and not very much life at all.

"Man this is nothing like back at Kanto and Johto, but I guess your liking the heat, eh Blaze?"

"Charrrrr" Blaze roared as it waved it's arms in the air.

As the two moved on towards there next destination, Zyph was starting to really hate the heat, and wished he had a bucket of frezzing water to pour over himself. All of a sudden he looked out to see a strange whit looking monkey lying on the ground sleeping. Zyph quickly pulled out his pokedex to identify it.

"Slakoth the lazy pokemon, if angered they will attack" the pokedex said.

"Hmmm you let's test out your skills Blaze, see if your really up to my standards" Zyph said as Blaze looked back at got in a fierce attack position.

"Blaze scratch the slakoth" Zyph ordered.

Blaze started charging towards the sleeping pokemon and then launched forward hitting it directly and knocking it back a few feet, waking it up. The wild Slakoth turned around and angrily starred him down. It then started charging towards Blaze with it's arms dangling behind.

"Blaze watch out" Zyph shouted as the wild slakoth slashed it's arms with a downward thrust at Blaze, but Blaze reacted quickly and put blocked it with his own slash attack.

"Now Blaze use your full force to thrust it back, then use growl" he ordered as Blaze then used his force to throw the slakoth back and off balance, and then roared at the slakoth.

"Charrrrr---char-char!" Blaze shouted as the Slakoth looked a little dazed.

"Now finish it slash attack!" Zyph ordered once again.

Blaze quickly and swiftly darted in towards the dazed slakoth and feroucisly slashed across it, knocking it to the ground and unconsicous. Zyph then quickly pulled one of the pokeballs prof. Oak had given him from his bag and tossed it at the Slakoth.

"Great job Blaze, your definatly up to my standards" he said as he waited to see if the pokemon would be caught or not.
 
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My bad BeatTheSpecialStage-Congrats Hiro caught a lvl 2 Male Nidoran! (Just from now on put some battling in before you catch thanks! lol)

Dboring-good start...i'll let ya know if ya capture it depending on your battle, and than you should be good till chapter 2.
 
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