The Perfect Death

Rainbow Skittlez

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    Before we begin, I realize I'm not poet, but try not to laugh, ok?

    Ok...

    When the day comes that I die, I don't want anyone to cry
    I don't want anyone to be sad just because I die
    I want my death to be simple and in bed
    I want it to be peaceful, with the pills by my head
    I want my funeral to be quick and small
    with no tears or depression, none at all
    Finally, I want to be remembered by my friends and family
    I want them to remember the good times they shared with me
    I basically want my friends and family to cope
    That's my perfect death, my final hope

    Yeah, pretty bad... oh well.
     
    It's pretty good, I like it. I think you have the potential to be a great poet ;>
     
    It's pretty nice. Potential's there, keep going at it hunny.
     
    Hmm.... pills?

    I like it and there's potential. I'm not laughing, and that would be a death that I would also prefer, a peaceful one. =)
     
    Its got a mix of emotion and word sense. For a lot of people making poems, its either/or. Nice poem
     
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