*Riolu Master*
The Aura Within
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Issue 36!
Not a lot of feedback lately huh.
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Not a lot of feedback lately huh.
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The Riolu
- Thread starter *Riolu Master*
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Ice1
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Well, you probably lost most of you're audience when you stopped for a while, and this sub is not very active. People don't tend to post in other threads then their own.
I don't feel like reading all the back catalog, so I started at 34. The dialogue is natural, but the progression feels weird. Everything goes incredibly fast, but it doesn't feel like there is happening that much.
I also like how it's not that static. Characters change place from frame to frame (well, mostly), and the comic feels diverse.
I would make it a little longer though, have some more room to give the characters some depth, without losing pace. And please give a summary so people can catch up.
I don't feel like reading all the back catalog, so I started at 34. The dialogue is natural, but the progression feels weird. Everything goes incredibly fast, but it doesn't feel like there is happening that much.
I also like how it's not that static. Characters change place from frame to frame (well, mostly), and the comic feels diverse.
I would make it a little longer though, have some more room to give the characters some depth, without losing pace. And please give a summary so people can catch up.
*Riolu Master*
The Aura Within
- 151
- Posts
- 11
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- Seen Jul 13, 2016
Hey guys it has been awhile!... A long while.. I'm just wondering if anyone wants me to continue with this comic. Or just don't because of how long I've been gone.
*Riolu Master*
The Aura Within
- 151
- Posts
- 11
- Years
- Seen Jul 13, 2016
Here, I'll post the next issue and see if anyone will still like this. If not I won't do this anymore.
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