The Secret Within --- The Ash and Misty Pairing club's fic

Yup. Tons and tons and tons of stories, but not all of them are worth reading.
Here's the link. I ask all the people who go to this link review the story they read!
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2242202/1/
And aye-yi yi there's a review here I believe I shall delete...stupid Advanceshippers. If yer curious, here's what he said since I'm gunna get rid of it right now:
ReviewerDateChapterTypeMISTY SUXS 2005-01-30 1 AnonymousI HATE THIS STORY IT SUXS LEAVE! AND U SUK TOO MISTY SUXS 4 EVER!
I DON"T CARE HOW MANY MISTY LOVER THERE R BUT ASH AND MAY R BETTER SINCE THEY DON"T ARGUE MUCH MISTY SUXS!

He must have had a bad day...
Anywhoo...it was published January 30th, 2005.
 
O.O;;; stupid advanceshippers... prolly was a weirdo from the AG series... i mean that this beardo started watching from AG.... idiotic freak....

o.o;; u named it Ash and Misty FOREVER o.o..... cant u change it?

and u forgot to put the link to the club...

and er.. u didnt put the author's notes o.o
 
o.o;; u named it Ash and Misty FOREVER o.o..... cant u change it?
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Sorry 'bout that :D Just some random title I thought mad and crazy AAML shippers would hop to. But I changed it!

and u forgot to put the link to the club...
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I was supposed to? Sorry...

and er.. u didnt put the author's notes o.o
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Author's notes?? It's a group made project :P. I actually just copy/pasted it. If you really really think it NEEDS to be changed I can strip it down and revamp and edit it for ya.
 
that'd be good WPM. name it er.. i guess.... The Secret Within.... the same one.

In description write down this - An AAML story (STUPID ADVANCESHIPPERS DONT COME HERE!!!) made by the AAML Club of The PokeCommunity!!

and dont forget the authors' notes:

Authors' Notes: blahpity blahpity blah <insert AN here>

and teh Disclaimer.. *pokes PC's copyright disclaimer at the bottom of screen*

then post the whole story!!!


o.o just about a day in FFNet and i've got the hang of it..
 
AN? What's AN? Aaand...where do you want author's notes, top or bottom?
Right. I'll go do all uh dat now boss
 
Light will shine on you soon
~My Fortune Cookie from t3e store
anyways lol....
Nice fanfic
Story/Plot: 7.5
Mechanics: 10
Overall: B-
COngrats
 
Eh. Never mind. It's been taken off due to improper use of grammer.
This is the second story on my account taken off...a few more and my account's flustered. :D Oh well! At least we achieved our goal: Honest reviews from hard reviewers. This is what some of them said:
From: Soft Flame Matthias ( https://www.fanfiction.net/u/699949/ )

Nice Plot but wish it was clearer. No need to dumb it down for your readers though. Please revise and Remove the author's notes in the middle of the story.

Aaand....that's the only one I got :D

Well, we got an honest review, and I think this one fits the bucket. Maybe, LanceLite, you should edit it a bit more, let me put it back, and see if their opinions are different?
 
k i'll change the stuff a little..

and u put the Authors' Notes in the middle? its ALWAYS on the top o.o

rite... i'll work on this from my machine and put it on html if i can... and i guess i can send it to u thru MSN.
 
Whoa whoa Lancelite, I copy/pasted what you wrote. I made no edits what so ever. Whatever the problem was with the Authors notes was not my problem.
 
o.o;; grammerical stuff is like evilizing my head... im currently halfway thru of -full- rewriting it up.... lets put my last three A-, A and A+ nerdism (more like nerd-influenced) marks in english story writing at school to test then....
 
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