The Thing

[O]

You can join the comic by clicking here, and You can be a character. That's all. Anyway, here is the first comic.

 

[Enix-Zae]

Dont get me started with the bad things in this comic. I hate to break it to you, but if you want to make this a good comic, you have a lot of work ahead of you :1

 

[O]

It's only the 1st 2 comics... 3rd and 4th done...

3rd- The first thing you would do in Iggy's Castle

4th- Don't all games work this way?

 

[fudge01]

ROfL they are good :3 i like em :D

 

[Allstories]

I'm with Aviex here, this comic is completely incomprehendible.

 

[Lizzie]

^_^ I thought your comic was great! Just I think you only have a half a plot, they're trying to do something, go somewhere, but we don't know what, you might want to explain why they're in Mario land XD and where they are, otherwise it gets confusing and boring.
Other than those problems, I thought your comic was great! It had a real sense of adventure in it! You really know how to capture your audiance with your comics =D The charectors are very funny, all you need know is a plot and your comic is on a roll ^_^ I hope to see more soon

 

[O]

I'm with Aviex here, this comic is completely incomprehendible.

Is that good or bad? I'm not too giddy with 6 syllable words. And I'm not looking in my dictionary. I need some inspiration for my next comic... Argh.

 

[Lizzie]

Omega, i'm all open ears, if you have any problems, or need any advise i'll help, just pm me, I pmed you already with some ideas that might help your comic, ^^

 

[O]

Here's number 5... Aren't you just so happy? This has been in my computer for a while. I didn't know I didn't post it yet.

EDIT- Thanks Lizzie for the ideas. I'm working on them.

 

[Allstories]

I...I don't get it. What's the joke?