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The Totodile

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That was quite funny... In a way...
 
I'll go easy on you and just tell you some simple things you could improve on :D. Make more than a one panel comic, don't use handrawn backgrounds, and better word bubbles. I won't rate it cause you said you didn't want me to be to harsh.
 
Goatman56 said:
I'll go easy on you and just tell you some simple things you could improve on :D. Make more than a one panel comic, don't use handrawn backgrounds, and better word bubbles. I won't rate it cause you said you didn't want me to be to harsh.
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You can use hand drawn backgrounds as long as their interesting, colorful, not two toned, and don't use default paint colors. The seint background is like that.
 
I know that but that background was nothing like Seints :\.
 
I like it! The Totodile reminds me of myself when I go on hikes.
 
I dont like one panel comics that much!!!

Anyway, its pretty funny (overall). Try to improve on your backgrounds and try some new poses.
 
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