The Totodile

[Latias Lover!]

My first comic, so don't go too harsh.

 

[Enix-Zae]

O.o......

words really cant describe that, well they can, but ill respect your wishe's about being to harsh O.o;

 

[Eon-Rider]

Ahahahaha! That was pretty funny(if it was supposed to). That was good!

 

[Pikabloo]

That was quite funny... In a way...

 

[Goatman56]

I'll go easy on you and just tell you some simple things you could improve on :D. Make more than a one panel comic, don't use handrawn backgrounds, and better word bubbles. I won't rate it cause you said you didn't want me to be to harsh.

 

[armadilloHD]

I'll go easy on you and just tell you some simple things you could improve on :D. Make more than a one panel comic, don't use handrawn backgrounds, and better word bubbles. I won't rate it cause you said you didn't want me to be to harsh.

You can use hand drawn backgrounds as long as their interesting, colorful, not two toned, and don't use default paint colors. The seint background is like that.

 

[Goatman56]

I know that but that background was nothing like Seints :\.

 

[NiNGi's Worst Nightmare]

I like it! The Totodile reminds me of myself when I go on hikes.

 

[Rhykasho]

I dont like one panel comics that much!!!

Anyway, its pretty funny (overall). Try to improve on your backgrounds and try some new poses.

 

[Poke]

Yes it is funny (in a way) just didnt look all that good. If it was better looking it really would look good!

 

[ChrisTom]

Um....

Where is the comic?

I guess my computer isn't working... :(