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[Pokémon] The Tree, The Flute, And The Mew

Normally it is preferred to post your story in separate posts for each chapter, for future reference. I don't have time to review it all now, but I can check your Prologue for you.
(All green text is part of the review)

ChrisTom said:

The books about legends of our Nation, depict a pink creature, with cat-like features. It has also been said to look like an embryo. ←(Fragment) It is called the "Phantom" Pokemon, the "God" Pokemon, and more correctly "Mew". Strong evidence suggests that not only is this Pokemon powerful and have incredible healing properties to those it touches, but it also is the most elusive and rare. It possesses a unique Genome (Genome should be lower case) which is linked with all other Pokemon. This makes many people think that even though Arceus created the Universe, it was in fact Mew who gave birth to Arceus, therefore having the ability to time travel. This creates a paradox, because a rule in physics states that everything has a beginning and an end. But because of the previous theory, Mew does not. It is ageless, and is eternal, and therefore infinite. It must have a greater understanding of the universe and its complexity, than the Human race will ever seem to know.

Most interestingly, it uses this infinite knowledge to play hide and seek. ←(Pure Awesomeness)
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If you are interested, I'll review the rest of the chapter for you by PM.
 
Dude, that was awesome. I loved it. Hehe. I love the playful nature of Mew. Can't wait to read more of your stories!!
 
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