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Thanks for your comment Poison. I love when people get my jokes. One of my friends said my story was a bad rip-off of Batman. But really Batman comics is what inspired me to make this story.
Pretty good. I like the part about Crobatman, very originial. I still think your chapters are a bit lacking and you could put a little more detail into what is happening. In all other things it is an over-all good story, and it's is very real. Not all that glittery crap with pokemon 'fainting'.
6/10
Thanks for your comment Poison. I love when people get my jokes. One of my friends said my story was a bad rip-off of Batman. But really Batman comics is what inspired me to make this story.