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The Unfortunate Chronicles Of Mario

Shikon no Tama

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    Well, I am back to sprites. And I have made a fairly ok Mario comic. I hope you guys like it. And if you can, comments and advice are welcome. It's supossed to be a little funny, so don't complain too much.
     
    it makes no scence...
    YAY NONSCENCE!
     
    LOL! it's very, very funny, I like how the words glow so they're easy to read, but you need to make it clear who's speaking first, how you do that is you put it the highest out of all the words, then whoever is speaking second it raised only a little below the first person, and the last person has the lowest speech, and because they're raised up so high you might want to make lines that connect to the words to whoevers speaking, anyway amazing job! I love the charectors and backounrd ^_^
     
    Thankies! I had to work on it for an hour just to re-colour the backround. The website I got the backround from made it all fuzzy and stuff so I had to redo it. It's good to know people enjoyed my comic. Maybe I'll even make some more of them later on. And I shall try to make it clear of who's speaking first and who's speaking last.
     
    That was actually pretty bad. It doesn't make any sense, and I mean that negatively. Don't give me any of that "OMG IT'S NOT SUPPOSED TO!!!!112212121". It's a pointless waste of effort.

    But you at least made it readable. So good for you on that. But you need to improve on your sense of what's funny and what's just annoying. Until then, don't waste our time, or your own for that matter.

    I..maybe I'm just a big jerk. :(
     
    Your know, that was quite mean to say about my comic. I worked hard on it. And if you thought it was annoying, then you could've al least try to make it sound liem you weren't just trying to be mean to me by saying all those things. And I am sorry if it doesn't make any sense.
     
    I'd like to see maybe boxes or somethin' to tell who's talking.
    The graphics were really nice though, 8.6/10
     
    Ok everyone! I am making another comic! But this time, I need two members to be in it. One has to be a super hero guy, and the other has to be a flying pidgey. Any volunteers? And this time I shall making sure the text can be read easily and is lined to who is saying it.
     
    Ok! You'll be Super Hero Steel! ^^
    Just be warned and please don't get mad, but you are quite clueless in the comic. xD
    Now then, we need someone to be the Pidgey! And Mario shall be himself! xD
     
    Ok Armadillo is the Pidgey. And Light you can have a role in the next one, ok? And Super Hero Steel does have a good ring to it. xD
    The comic is almost done!
     
    Sorry for double posting, but my comic is done! ^^
    If you a role in the comics to come, you have to fill this out:

    Name:
    Character Name:
    Character Personality:
    Character Sprite:

    Now then, I tried my best trying to make this comic good, so I'm sure everyone will like it! ^_~
    Now then, to know who is talking first, there are little squares in each text box. The number of squares there are in a text box, is the number they speak at. Like the number one text box is the first person talking. I used a different backround for this one, and added in the buttom the roles and all.
     
    I am so surprised that people actually liked my comics! After what Allstories said, I was certain my comic was horrible and no one would even bother to look at the second one. And for the third one, there can be PC members on it. It would be like the Unfortune Chronicles of Mario with PC members featured in it. If you want to be in the third comic, just fill out the form I posted a couple of posts ago.
     
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