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The Very Best Like No One Ever Was(Ash's Father:Red Ketchum)

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    • Seen Feb 14, 2011
    Hello, everyone I'm new here and this is my very first fanfiction I ever wrote, it was requested by my friends on youtube so I'd appriciate any reviews you could give me; compliments, constructive criticism, some pointers, suggestions, etc. Thank you for taking the time to read it and I absolutely love feedback so please give me something, anything, I'd really appriciate it. The story is about how Ash has to track down and battle his long lost father who just happens to be the missing Pokemon Master, Red Ketchum so if the concept of Ash's father piques your interest I recommend this ^__^ So please read and review, thank you all so much!
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    Chapter 1
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