The Walls That Enclose Us That We Call House (Weird,long name)

Izzy

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    Yes, I made a new comic. It stars Kyoto Ralef, Izzy Hamagu, Lily Aeriol, and Vase Deepwind living in an apartment-mansion in New York. Kyoto, the guy that breaks everything, breaks a wall and therefore, sends the cast onto the streets to find a job suitable for maintaining there house. Not very funny yet, just practicing for now.

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    Everything has my own personal touch. The sprites, the backgrounds, the characters and such. Enjoy. Note: all issues are long, so if you want me to remove the 'latest episode' thing, then please feel free to voice so..

    and I'm off, again
     
    Very interesting. I like this comic it shows tons of potential. The only mistakes I see are in panel 4. The O is messed up and theres a little dot in the characters speech bubble.Also the characters mouths aren't even open.The joke is okay but a little stale. So 8/10, very good :D.
     
    Thats good. Nice sprites, nice backgrounds and a pretty funny joke. 8.5/10.
     
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    Err... comments, please. >>
     
    Meh, the humor didn't do it for me. I just don't think it's really that funny. I didn't care for the shading on the characters either. The backgrounds are adequate, though.
     
    Shading on characters is alright, backgrounds are awesome, jokes funny, very good comic, and I LOVE it. 9.2/10. Can't wait to see more and meet the other characters.
     
    It is pretty cool! Did you make those sprites? 10/10 putting familiar characters can also make people intersted.
     
    Why must all my awful things live on forever and my good things die...
     
    Shinin said:
    Thats good. Nice sprites, nice backgrounds and a pretty funny joke. 8.5/10.
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    I never saw Shining giving a so much high rating...
    Thing change~ =p
    *laughs to self*


    Nice comic, SD. Much better than all the things we've seen around here in the past weeks. I'd like to give the suggestion of putting the title not in the right part. I mean, poisitioning it in the middle or Left. Afterall, that made me laugh~
    I love "Blame the creator" jokes...
     
    Taking into consideration you said it was just practice, nice comic. I didn't really think it was that funny though, but I loved the sprites & shading. Good job. =D
     
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