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There, the proofreading is almost fully complete.
Thanks Archer, but just so ya know, the comma before "and" is actually correct. I also chose not to reword most of what you did since I dunno, they seemed fine to me ._. I also kept it as "special defensive" but I'm not sure which way is correct. Either way, I don't think it matters much and can always be edited so eh.
But yeah, it's mostly done. I capitalized all of the stat things that were actually referring to the stat itself, but kept stuff like "special attacker" and "defenses" lowercase. I think Smogon does it the same way but I'm not sure.
But yeah, once this is done, I'm going to report it as three posts equal in length (to make it less visually sdghsfjkghbnsig when the third post comes around) and it can replace the DP version of this. I think we're going to need a new compiled guides thread though since the old one is cluttered with deleted posts and the first post's guide is about to be replaced (the yawnpunch one).
But yeah. Anything else you guys want to add?
btw I'll be adding CurseLax soon. I know there might be an overabundance of movesets but what the hell, might as well keep them unless they're like NEVER used.
Thanks Archer, but just so ya know, the comma before "and" is actually correct. I also chose not to reword most of what you did since I dunno, they seemed fine to me ._. I also kept it as "special defensive" but I'm not sure which way is correct. Either way, I don't think it matters much and can always be edited so eh.
But yeah, it's mostly done. I capitalized all of the stat things that were actually referring to the stat itself, but kept stuff like "special attacker" and "defenses" lowercase. I think Smogon does it the same way but I'm not sure.
But yeah, once this is done, I'm going to report it as three posts equal in length (to make it less visually sdghsfjkghbnsig when the third post comes around) and it can replace the DP version of this. I think we're going to need a new compiled guides thread though since the old one is cluttered with deleted posts and the first post's guide is about to be replaced (the yawnpunch one).
But yeah. Anything else you guys want to add?
btw I'll be adding CurseLax soon. I know there might be an overabundance of movesets but what the hell, might as well keep them unless they're like NEVER used.