Tour De Hoenn

[Jesus Freak Josh]

Well, a different journey sprite comic I made at the start of the year. It's about a tour guide (Josh) showing people around Hoenn.

WARNING: Some references not intended for young children. Mild references though.
1 - Littleroot Town
2 - Route 101
3 - Oldale Town
4 - Route 102
5 - Petalburg City

Current Episode:

Credits:
Meowth346's Charsets for all the characters (I think)
MS Paint being my pallete.
The RBY/GSC hero sprite ripped by me
Maps from VGMaps and AdvanceMap

Comments and Constructive Criticism

And yes I am aware of the rookie mistake in Ep 4.

 

[Sweet Smoochum]

Well, I guess I'm the 1st to post. "Yay me" *claps* Pretty good comic so far. I like that you used speech bubbles and that you have the map before each episode. Your comic seems very unique, too...so I'll...be back...and I hope you keep posting more...well, bye for now...

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

Thank you, Lily.

Episode 5 "Petalburg - Murder" is now up.

 

[Hero of Time Link³]

this is good but your text boxes could use some work to make them look like they are on the people

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

this is good but your text boxes could use some work to make them look like they are on the people

What do you mean by that? Make it look like they are on people?

 

[Hero of Time Link³]

yeah like make the text the persons main colour

 

[Jesus Freak Josh]

yeah like make the text the persons main colour

Oh I get ya. I might give it a try, see how it looks.

 

[Rinji]

Great job Josh! Keep up the awesome work ^^