trb's fakemon

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---> at level 32

 

[ScizorZ]

those are quite good, the first one, a pre-evo of Sentret I suppose, looks a little messed up on the striped thing wrapped around it's body. is it a tail?

 

[Train rides by]

yes its a tail im surprised that you got the pre evo right though

 

[ScizorZ]

I guessed by the Ears and tail (AND THE FACT THAT I LOVE THAT EVOLUTION FAMILY!) and I also got Misdreatot and MewTwo Jr. / Spoink Jr. lol. Kinda stuck on the pig thing though.

 

[Negative-Zero]

is the 2nd one a fakemon? 3rd is misdrvous pre-evo but you could work on the dress-thing(make it a little less like a nintendog) 4th is a registeel pre evo?

 

[Train rides by]

well actualy the pig is a fire starter the mewtwo jr. is an alien but not a pre evo and yes a misdrevious pre evo

 

[Negative-Zero]

ahhhh (4th)looks like a registeel kindsa

 

[Train rides by]

now that you mentioned it it does hm maybe i should try making pre evos for the regis and one big evo regareg(rega-regal,reg-regi)

 

[Negative-Zero]

REGIBOULDER, REGIFREEZE,REGIRON(evos)
regipeble,regicicle,regimetal(pre evos)

 

[Train rides by]

or pre evos:regible,regicle,regiron

 

[Destrozone]

The pig needs a lot of work. First of all, since it's a battle sprite, it needs to be turned as if it were an opponent pokemon facing your own. Second, the shading needs work (source needs redirecting after flip, outlines need to be darkened, general color selection needs to be saturated to a darker level, etc.) Finally, You may want to thicken the tail up a bit, right now it looks like a curved twig that lit off a fart the blew out is butt =b

I'll critique the rest tomorrow, i g2g.
~Des~

 

[Train rides by]

Thanks for the tip I knew It wasn't perfect but couuldnt figure out what was wrong thanks again

 

[Negative-Zero]

now that i looked at the pig again it kinda looks like a sideways bomb
awesome lemur cannon thing

 

[Train rides by]

thanks but the canoon is an eye

 

[Negative-Zero]

oh... woops
nice new .....uh........eyeball......lemur.....thing.