Trying this one more time..Competative team help?

[Zazzeh]

From the person who cant spell to save her life.....

Ok I tried once and nobody's helpin' me here..Im going for the big tournament on Saturday at Gamestop and need help with my team. I wanna know what I can do to their moves to they better match the personality of the Pokemon or what their good at..Help pleeeease! >_< If you think there's nothing wrong with my team..GO AHEAD & SAY SO >___< So I can rest easier. -.-

Crobat: Item held: Leftovers
Bashful

Cross poison
Shadow ball
Wing attack
Mean look

Swampert: Item held: Rindo Berry
Sassy

Hammer arm
Endeavor
Earthquake
Muddy water

Electrode: Item held: Magnet
Quirky

Thunderbolt
Mirror coat
Magnet rise
Substitute

Walrein: Item held: NeverMeltIce
Bashful

Sheer Cold
Aurora Beam
Hail
Surf

Charizard: Item held: Adamant orb
Mild

Heat wave
Dragon Claw
Blast Burn
Flamethrower

Roserade: Item held: Big root
Bashful

Giga Drain
Toxic Spikes
Magical Leaf
Grasswhistle
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YES I know I spelled Competitive wrong..just realizing that Dx
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I sorta dislike the idea of having two water types on my team. Im thinking about replacing my Swampert with my Rhypherior.

Rhypherior: Held item: Rindo Berry/ Fist plate
(Cant remember Nature >_<)

Hammer Arm
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Mega Horn

To Admins/Mods: Sorry if this is against the rules, but I REALLY need help. Dx

 

[Sal Kar]

a good move to try to use on at least one pokemon would be stealth rock, if you dont have it id be happy to give it to you. other then that, your team is pretty good, with roserade try changing giga drain with grass knot? EDIT: if you want to test your team, ill battle you.

 

[Zazzeh]

a good move to try to use on at least one pokemon would be stealth rock, if you dont have it id be happy to give it to you. other then that, your team is pretty good, with roserade try changing giga drain with grass knot? EDIT: if you want to test your team, ill battle you.

Wow..Maybe ill see if Swampert & Stealthrock are compatible..and I think I used the TM Grass knot ona diff Pokemon xD Ill see if Roserade can learn(Via move tutor) it..but I like Giga drain because it works with the Big Root >_< but yeah trying out my team would be nice ^^

 

[sims796]

Now I'll REALLY help. Don't use Grass Knot. In fact, the problem here is that you have too many of the same type moves on one poke. Only one type attack per pokemon, to make them as versitile as possible.

Here's a better Roserade

Roserade
Giga Drain/Energy Ball
Shadow Ball
Sludge Bomb
Stun Spore

See, on.y one offensive move per type. It can handle more now. Same goes for Charizard & Wailren. Sheer Cold is a horrible move. 30% chance to hit? Replace that with Ice Beam. You can also lose Aurora Beam.

As for Swmpert, he uses physical moves best, with high attack power, so get rid of Muddy Water. You have to check their stats, and see which moves suit them best. In Swamperts case, special moves won't do so good.

Hope this helps :)

 

[Zazzeh]

Now I'll REALLY help. Don't use Grass Knot. In fact, the problem here is that you have too many of the same type moves on one poke. Only one type attack per pokemon, to make them as versitile as possible.

Hmm ok..I see watcha mean. Thanks much ^^

 

[sims796]

Check out my update for more advice.

 

[Zazzeh]

Check out my update for more advice.

Cool I will ^^ Filler..moo =D

 

[Sal Kar]

heh....yah sorry, i really know nothing of a good team, just putting wat i thought might work...

 

[AztecSunshine]

From the person who cant spell to save her life.....

Ok I tried once and nobody's helpin' me here..Im going for the big tournament on Saturday at Gamestop and need help with my team. I wanna know what I can do to their moves to they better match the personality of the Pokemon or what their good at..Help pleeeease! >_< If you think there's nothing wrong with my team..GO AHEAD & SAY SO >___< So I can rest easier. -.-

Crobat: Item held: Leftovers
Bashful

Cross poison
Shadow ball
Wing attack
Mean look
looks good. nothing is wrong with it but i dunno about the nature

Swampert: Item held: Rindo Berry
Sassy

Hammer arm
Endeavor
Earthquake
Muddy water
asen't surf batter than muddy water? it has more pp the nature is............dunno i am not a nature guy i don't know any thing about them

Electrode: Item held: Magnet
Quirky

Thunderbolt
Mirror coat
Magnet rise
Substitute
moves are pretty good i like em ^ _ ^

Walrein: Item held: NeverMeltIce
Bashful

Sheer Cold
Aurora Beam
Hail
Surf
no! don't use sheer cold it has realy low acc. use some thing like.....em..............i son't know some thing un icy

Charizard: Item held: Adamant orb
Mild

Heat wave
Dragon Claw
Blast Burn
Flamethrower
blast burn sucks! don't use it and why do you hav 3 fire attacks? take of blast burn and heat wave

Roserade: Item held: Big root
Bashful

Giga Drain
Toxic Spikes
Magical Leaf
Grasswhistle
why do you have 2 grass attacks? make a variety in moves
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YES I know I spelled Competitive wrong..just realizing that Dx
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I sorta dislike the idea of having two water types on my team. Im thinking about replacing my Swampert with my Rhypherior.

Rhypherior: Held item: Rindo Berry/ Fist plate
(Cant remember Nature >_<)

Hammer Arm
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Mega Horn
i hate him soo i well just leave him sorry
To Admins/Mods: Sorry if this is against the rules, but I REALLY need help. Dx

here you go hope i helped ^ -^

 

[Zazzeh]

here you go hope i helped ^ -^

I see now..I need type variation...Ok I have found my problem. -Goes to GBA games for TMs- Hahah..^^ Thanks everyone!

 

[sims796]

Yanmega gave good advice, but Waterfall works better than Surf on Swampert, cause Swampert has more attack than sp.atk.

 

[Lone--Wanderer]

Don't use Neutral Natures. Roserade should be Modest or Timid, and if your Charizard is a Special Sweeper thingy it needs Modest, hands down.