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Tyranitar and Milotic (A Poetic Love Story)

TJgamer

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    Oh by the way, I think it's funny that a tyranitar is scared, in my mind they are fearless since they are so strong and feared.

    If your father told you throughout your life that there are fierce monsters and beasts in the sea, wouldn't you be afraid as well? Even if you were strong and big?
    I understand how funny it sounds though.
     

    TJgamer

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    Writing has been pretty slow lately. Then again, this is one of my longer chapters as well.
    Thank you for the complements by the way, and enjoy!


    {Chapter 10: Fishy feelings}



    Just when the sun peaked,
    The two from the land and sea,
    Planned to meet next eve.

    Not taking a chance,
    They both said their brief farewells,
    And sadly parted.

    As she returned home,
    The morning sun gleamed brightly,
    Down into the sea.

    The reef was quiet.
    Everybody was sleeping,
    Likewise her parents.

    No one was watching,
    Milotic rushed off to bed,
    Before morning broke.

    After a long while,
    She started to hear noises,
    Coming from outside.

    Perhaps they all woke,
    Or someone knew of her plan,
    And wants her answers.

    It was very tense,
    Then someone tapped on the door,
    And a voice called in.

    It was her father.
    "Hurry out of your napping;
    Morning has risen."

    She felt insecure,
    Her guilt made her paranoid,
    Of any sound or voice.

    Just as Father said,
    She yawned and rose out of bed,
    She had little sleep.

    So brushed her red hair,
    Polished her colorful scales,
    And primped her tail scales.

    As she swam outside,
    To do her daily business,
    Her father was gone.

    "He must have left early."
    Milotic thought to herself.
    "Must have been urgent."

    Seeking company,
    She ran into her mother,
    Who was sorting gems.

    Her mother loved jewels,
    Whether valuable or not,
    But for their beauty.

    The mystic water,
    Which Milotic often wears,
    Was her most special.

    "Good morning, Mother."
    Milotic cheerfully said,
    Along with a yawn.

    "Did you rest enough?
    You're usually active."
    Her mother wondered.

    "I'm very sorry,
    It was a long night." said she,
    With another yawn.

    "Well, keep your head up,
    Especially for tonight,
    At the Coral Ball."

    It struck her so hard,
    She forgot about the ball,
    That was held tonight.

    How could she meet him,
    If there is a ball tonight?
    This did not look good.

    Back on the green land,
    Tyranitar was waking,
    From his brief napping.

    Last night, he returned,
    When an unexpected friend,
    Ran up to meet him.

    Marowak spoke this,
    "Why did you make me worry?
    I thought you were killed!

    Prior to this time,
    I heard footsteps in my sleep,
    And they were from you.

    I saw in the black,
    A large, dark figure walking,
    Again, this was you!"

    This was a surprise,
    Tyranitar said nothing,
    But stared on with shock.

    His friend spoke again,
    "Were you in your secret place?
    Did you see the girl?"

    "Yes, friend." He replied.
    "You don't need to fret for me,
    It's perfectly safe."

    "How do you know this?
    After all what your dad said."
    Marowak asked him.

    "My new friend told me.
    And maybe Father's stories,
    Were rumors." He said.

    Back at the present,
    Tyranitar woke slowly,
    His head felt heavy.

    When he walked outside,
    His father was opening,
    And setting his shop.

    "You are up late, Son."
    He said with a jolly voice,
    He seemed to not mind.

    That hot afternoon,
    Tyranitar was sweating,
    Over an anvil.

    His father trained him,
    How to smith and forge items,
    That others may use.

    The whole day boiled on,
    The sun beaming down on earth,
    On his sweating head.

    Tyranitar worked,
    Slowly swinging his hammer,
    As he forged onward.

    Sweat poured from his head,
    But the thought of Milotic,
    Brightened up his soul.

    Then a voice shouted,
    "Son, your leaving the anvil!
    Keep yourself focused!"

    His father was right,
    The smelting was improper,
    His fatigue was strong.

    The lack of bedrest,
    Thoughts of Milotic, the heat,
    They effected him.

    "Son, is something wrong?
    The heat never wears you out."
    His father wondered.

    "I am alright, Dad.
    I just didn't rest too well."
    Said Tyranitar.

    "Was it a bad dream?
    Or you just didn't feel well?"
    His father asked him.

    "I was spending time,
    ...With a...friend." He said slowly.
    "Are you upset, Dad?"








    Now that I think about the upcoming ball, I can really think of more ideas for the story.
     
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    TJgamer

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    I have hit a few snags here and there, thus having me think very hard to have the story fit well.
    Well, it's here now, so no matter.




    {Chapter 11: The Coral Ball}



    "Why of course not, Son.
    But you have to let me know,
    When you leave from home."

    His dad continued,
    "I know you trust Marowak,
    Just be responsible."

    "I will." He answered.
    But after he said, 'a friend',
    He meant Milotic.

    Late that afternoon,
    Milotic was modeling,
    For the Coral Ball.

    No outfit seemed right,
    Many of her old dresses,
    Were too small for her.

    She found a worn one,
    That belonged to her mother,
    It was a bit snug.

    It was scarlet red,
    With yellow laces and bands,
    And a green waist sash.

    After she was dressed,
    She thought over a new plan,
    For her special night.

    She had to see him,
    She couldn't disappoint him,
    On a night like this.

    But she had no time,
    Soon after she fully dressed up,
    Her mother called her.

    It was time to leave,
    And attend the coral ball,
    Down at Aqua Hall.

    The great Aqua Hall,
    Is her father's meeting place,
    Where he held meetings.

    For tonight's event,
    It is where all will attend,
    This splendid party.

    With her family,
    Milotic wasted no time,
    And were on their way.

    Meanwhile on the earth,
    The sun sank towards the west,
    As sundown approached.

    After their small talk,
    Tyranitar was packing,
    For the scheduled night.

    He packed some berries,
    Also, an extra large cloak,
    And his power band.

    With all of that done,
    He walked out of the back door,
    And sneaked to the trees.

    Knowing the way well,
    He climbed over the steep hill,
    And was on his way.

    Within Aqua Hall,
    The guests already arrived,
    And started dancing.

    It is tradition,
    That one will choose another,
    To be friends for life.

    After the ball ends,
    The new friends would return home,
    And become soul mates.

    Milotic looked on.
    Most of the males were handsome,
    Some daring, some bold.

    But not one of them,
    Could replace Tyranitar,
    He was very kind.

    Milotic believed,
    That it is the soul that counts,
    Not the appearance.

    This made her feel strange,
    She is going against law,
    And her father's word.

    But she promised him.
    And the other Pokémon,
    Were not right for her.

    She stayed for a while,
    To minimize suspicion,
    Until sundown came.

    She could not be late,
    So she met with her father,
    And implied to him.

    "I know whom I seek,
    But the gift I want to give,
    Is back at our home.

    I must retrieve it."
    Her father had a slight doubt,
    But he trusted her.

    "If you move with haste,
    You may make it back in time."
    He so responded.

    With the privilege,
    She darted out of the hall,
    And straight towards home.​






    I'm not too sure, it's either what I said from above is true, or I was just being a little lazy at this time. My apologies for either one.
     
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    eveelution

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  • You have inspired me to put a poem in my signature.

    Your poetry is divine,
    It forever surpasses mine.

    -_-' Yeah, its not very good is it.
     

    TJgamer

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    Originally I would have posted the next chapter by this time.
    But due to certain technology problems, the chapter is now delayed.
    I'll try to get it finished as soon as possible.
     

    ChrisTom

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  • Wow! TJ, this is incredible. This is like world class. I read the thing and all I can say is wow. It obviously reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, but that was a given. I loved Tyrannitar's poem, and the whole Haiku theme. Like I said, world class man, world class.
     

    Lickitricky

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  • This is...absolutely amazing. Even though based off of animated Japanese creatures, you manage to use your brilliant poetic skills to create a true love story of Pokemon that is not in any way stereotypically romantic or corny. I can't believe the amazing work you must have put into this- please, please keep it up, I want to keep reading!
     

    TJgamer

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    Thanks everyone!
    I'll be working on the future chapters now.
    I guess you could say I have been going on hiatus. But now, time for me to get to work!
     

    TJgamer

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    To new readers, enjoy the next chapter.
    To past readers, I am sooo sorry for my extreme laziness and procrastination!




    {Chapter 12: A Night to Never Forget}



    The moon shone brightly,
    Down upon the grassy hills,
    And tall trees below.

    They cast long shadows,
    And so did Tyranitar,
    Who still wandered on.

    "Will she make it there?"
    Tyranitar spoke softly,
    "Will she remember?"

    She must remember,
    For she was very honest,
    And they promised too.

    Hours of walking,
    The cove was getting so near,
    Yet, it was so far.

    Through the dark passage,
    Milotic swam with great speed,
    And saw her homeland.

    When she found her home,
    She went 'round to her garden,
    And searched for her gift.

    Underneath a shrub,
    She pulled out her precious gift,
    A glowing blue plant.

    In an instant flash,
    She quickly left the garden,
    Heading for the shore.

    She soon saw the light,
    It was the bright, silver moon,
    She was near the top.

    Her head she emerged,
    And she breathed in cool fresh air,
    It felt wonderful.

    The cove was close by.
    She approached shore with caution,
    And watched out for him.

    It was not too long,
    Before she heard deep footsteps,
    Thumping near the trees.

    She stood very still,
    And peered into the darkness,
    Veiled from the moonlight.

    A figure arrived,
    With a familiar size.
    It was her kind friend!

    They stared silently,
    Only the waves and the wind,
    Were making soft sounds.

    Tyranitar smiled,
    As he saw Milotic's eyes,
    Glowing like jewels.

    She wore a red robe,
    Lined with bright yellow linen,
    And a dark green sash.

    His heart, beating hard,
    His eyes, glued to her beauty,
    His legs, quivering.

    "...You've made it." He spoke.
    "...You have, as well." She replied.
    They were both happy.

    Milotic's head turned,
    Facing towards the bright moon,
    As full as their love.

    "Such luminous glow.
    It lights our way in the black."
    She said with wonder.

    "Just like you, my love."
    Tyranitar spoke to her.
    And she understood.

    Their lives were empty,
    But now that they have met,
    Life itself was filled.

    "What is that you hold?"
    He spoke, pointing at the glow,
    She held behind her.

    She raised it to him,
    And smiled, saying, "It's for you.
    An Indigo Bulb."

    He gently took it,
    A held it close to his breast,
    And sighed of delight.

    "Thank you, Milotic."
    Tyranitar said softly,
    "It is very nice."

    Milotic was glad,
    And smiled at his compliment,
    And remained silent.

    Tyranitar glared,
    At her luminous present,
    And then towards her.

    Her glamour was grand,
    More than anybody else,
    He had ever known.

    His heart pounded still,
    Such great beauty deserves more,
    Than to just be watched.

    He held out his arm,
    Very slowly and gently,
    Hoping she'd respond.

    Milotic leaned back,
    But she knew she could trust him,
    And stood motionless.

    Slowly leaning forward,
    She calmly rested her head,
    On his open hand.

    It was very warm,
    And it was rather cozy,
    For a stone hard hand.

    She slid up his arm,
    And laid upon his shoulder,
    Hearing his soft breath.

    Keeping his posture,
    Tyranitar stood frozen,
    Both in shock and joy.

    Her alien scales,
    Brushing against his shoulder,
    Felt so strange to him.

    But, it was warm too,
    The silky, fluent texture,
    Was very calming.

    Having the courage,
    He carefully placed his hand,
    On top of her head.

    He touched carefully,
    He didn't want to scare her,
    And stroked her red hair.

    It felt genuine,
    As if it were made of silk,
    Far smoother than that.

    Its fragrance was sweet,
    Smelled as a Pecha berry,
    Only with more strength.

    Milotic relaxed,
    Feeling his warm, tender hands,
    Stroke her bright red hair.

    Now having no fear,
    She wrapped her delicate tail,
    Around his shoulders.

    Forgetting his fear,
    Tyranitar relaxed too,
    And smiled in relief.

    She smiled back at him,
    Seeing his kind, trusting face,
    With his toothy grin.

    And soon after that,
    They were in a sweet embrace,
    Happy as can be.

    The ocean waves,
    The wind blowing through the trees,
    Kept these souls in peace.


    {Upcoming: To be announced...}




    ...Am I getting a bit rusty at this?
    What do you think?
     
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    TJgamer

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    Thanks a million!

    And I will no longer procrastinate anything.
    I will finish whatever I start as soon as possible.
     
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