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Ty's first poem

Kyogre-chan

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    Suicidal Love

    It's aching through my body
    It's driving me insane
    The temptation of being with you
    I want to hold you again

    I still remember that day
    I woke up, and you were gone
    You didn't even leave a note
    I sat there and started to mourn

    We were supposedly inseparable
    Our relationship was gold
    Yet you just threw it away
    You made me feel so cold

    Now I'm here holding a knife
    Thinking this is the only way
    Shivering and shaking nervously
    I was going to die today

    My hand began to move
    The knife pierced through my skin
    "There's no turning back,"
    I said with a depressed grin

    I quickly fell backwards
    Lying motionless in my deathbed
    But I continued to cry
    Even though I was dead

    ---

    This is dedicated to somebody who I believed to be my girlfriend. She and her family moved away back in 2001 without telling me. ;_; I know, I'm bad at writing poems.
     
    Thats's my favourite type of poem..
    I once wrote something similar in school and ended up getting suspended..o.0
    Well if its your first poem, its good. I would have never thought of that even now..
    So as usual, any more coming up?
     
    Maybe. I haven't had all that many emotional moments in my life, so I don't have too much to write about. XD

    You got suspended for that?! O_O; That's... new. XD
     
    Nice poem, I'm not really good at making poems though. ^_^
     
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