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Universial tournament starring mario and luigi

PokemonChampion2K4

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    Hi!and welcome to my first comic and comic series.Here is the first comic for the series*image removed*Enjoy!I will be making more parts for this comic soon :D
     
    I like it its ok I just want to see the fighting once I see that if its good i'll probably be hooked
     
    I think the To Be Continued panel was completely un-necessary, try shrinking to to 75% so it's a bit smaller. It looks over pixelated at its size now.
     
    Make sure you give credit to the people who made/ripped sprites that you use in your comics (like to Tonberry2K for the Luigi in SMRPG style). And the comic is way too big.
     
    Ok I thank the spriters resouce for the sprites and any other site I got some off of.and does anyone want to be the owner of the toournament,champ of last year or announcer pm me :D
     
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    The comic wasn?t bad. The only thing is that it?s big. Anyways nice work.
     
    thx dragonair I still need a couple more characters
     
    TOO BIG! also,make the text bubbles a little small,so they're close to the actual text,also,since it's a Universial Tournament,try adding a few sonic sprites,maybe Inuyasha,I dunno,PM me if you want some sprites...also,if it will be a good comic,DO NOT KEEP THAT 3-D BACKGROUND. :p
     
    I won't that is just from there and don't worry about sprites I got plenty it is going to have a lot of characters
     
    Oh, and don't make it SMRPG style. Use 2D style or Mario & Luigi style.
     
    fine I will say that they misteriously turned into 2d
     
    It will come out soon all i need is an owner and anouncer for it anyone want to be one of them?
     
    please make your boxs smaller you used space for atleast 6 boxes and your bubbles are too large for what the character is saying plus if your going to include a to be continued box please make sure you have a even number of boxs so you can just pat a very small box across the botom (about 2cm) with to be continued in it
     
    ok I will take your advice for the next part which will begin after I get one more person to play a part.
     
    no I didn't logmon so I need it
     
    once I getr one more character I can make the second third fourth and fifth comic
     
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