Untitled (#1)

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    Title - "Untitled" (#1)

    Author - Chibi


    Beautiful addiction
    to the silky feel of your skin
    to your alighted ocean eyes
    your voice, the songstress din

    Beautiful disaster
    the day I fell for you
    only, so young and naive
    at first, I hardly knew

    And when the world falls around me
    I find condolance in your smile
    and, in this ever-graceful slumber,
    I pray to stay here for awhile

    Beautiful sunshine
    caressing your starlit locks
    and I've yet to see you disgraced
    By your cascading teardrops

    Beautiful surrender
    to the call of "forevermore"
    an unconscious grin to you, my love
    and an "I love you", from the adored

    And when the world feeds on my suppression
    I gaze through the many obscured forms
    in this galeful waltz, under tranquil nights
    A candid, follied love is born

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    Notes - Well, unfortunately, I couldn't come up with a title for this one. I tried, I did for, like, three days, but nothing hit me. I'd already written a poem called "Beautiful" and, though I don't remember it well or have any idea where I could have put the draft, I didn't want to write something else and give it the same name. I'm just a bit more moral than that.

    So, comments?
     
    Very nice.....but what leaves me curious is the dots at the end...
     
    Oh; sorry if that confused it. It was basically to mark the end of the poem. Lol.
     
    Thank you so much for the comment. I was forcing myself so hard to come out with something new, but I'm glad you all liked it anyway. Lol.
     
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