Untitled Pokemon game

[D-jo4000]

Well I don't have much experience with Pokemon games(the only ones I had were Thunder Yellow and Jewel) but I suppose this might work out. At the beggining, the child professor, Billy Kamon, introduces himself and the world of Pokemon.

Story: You are a young teen from Brovetree Town. You start out with the ol' be a master thing. But you also wanna be the most well known trainer in the Rileok region. To do this you must raise your rep and maybe do a little world saving or you could conquer it. You've got the whole world in your hands.

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[[_DarkDragon_]]

hum, seems ok for a beginner except you should close the borders of the maps with trees, etc because it will be loads of work if you have to put teleport events all around the map :P

 

[D-jo4000]

Hmm.. Okay. always opened to constructive criticism.

 

[[_DarkDragon_]]

oh, and try learning something off the mapping tutorials in the game dev tutorial sub-forums. They will really help with your mapping :)

 

[D-jo4000]

well I kind of did this in a rush to be asa non-symmetrical as possible(nature's beauty)

 

[[_DarkDragon_]]

yes I know but I'll tell you what's wrong with the current version of your map:
-- Too big for what it has, adding something in the middle like a fountain or something will do just fine.
-- This is a Town/City, not a route therefore you should have roads that go to all or most of the houses.
-- You used walkable water on some of the borders, this type of water is not suitable for borders.
-- You repeated too much the rocks on the bottom of the map and the small trees on the sides, try to make a mix between big trees, small trees and rocks.
-- Those houses have windows, try to put them on.
-- There's a big absence of signs, there should be more signs (even if it's the wood ones) around the town/city.
-- make the cave a bit bigger and more random.

I think that's all :)

 

[Datriot]

This is impressive for a beginner, good work! I can help you with some event problems you may have, I have quite a bit experiance with rm2k3. ;)

 

[Rm2k3Guy]

Advice : Dont rush! Take your time it will look alot better
looks good :)

 

[Silon]

Hey! That all looks good! (Are you Bruno1440?)

 

[[_DarkDragon_]]

Why should he be bruno? anyways, his english is too good compared to bruno's :)

 

[afsnyder]

This is wierd!!!!!!!!!!! .