Vainz wants his new team rated

Vainz

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    Ok, i had to get rid of my trainer card earlier, so now i would like to make a new one based on this team. I dont know if you can use a number system to grade my team, but if you can, 1-10 would be nice.

    Team-

    Magmortar@ Choice Scarf
    EV's 252 Def, 128 Speed, 128 HP
    Modest
    -Flamethrower
    -Thunder Bolt
    -Focus Blast
    -Sunny Day

    Metagross@ Life Orb
    EV's 252 SpDef, 128 Speed, 128 Attack
    Nature: Adamant
    -Meteor Mash
    -Thunder Punch
    -Earthquake
    -Agility

    Togekiss@ Leftovers
    EV's Def-252, Sp.Attack-128, HP-128
    Nature: Modest
    -Air Slash
    -Aura Sphere
    -Thunder Wave
    -Roost

    Milotic@ Leftovers
    EV's Def: 252, HP-128, SpDef-128
    Nature: Bold
    -Ice Beam
    -Surf
    -Recover
    -Hypnosis

    Dusknoir@ Leftovers
    Evs: HP 252, SpDef 184, 72 Atk
    Nature: Careful
    - Shadow Punch
    - Pain Split
    - Will-O-Wisp
    - Mean Look

    Breloom@ ???
    EV's Speed-252, Attack-128, HP-128
    Nature: Adamant
    -Spore
    -Seed Bomb
    -Brick Break/Drain Punch/Sky Uppercut
    -Stone Edge

    Any Help Please
     
    Changes are...

    1) Magmortar with Choice Scarf and Sunny Day, he would just Sunny Day over and over, definately change that with Will-O-Wisp/HP Ice, or change his item into something else. I'm also not crazy about having maxed EVs in Def, you may want to look into EVs for Sp Atk and Spd.

    2) I would like to see more EVs in Atk so that Breloom's Drain Punch can do more damage and heal more. With Breloom's poor defenses, I suggest a Focus Sash so he can survive a Aerial Ace or Ice Beam to Spore and Drain Punch the enemy.

    Other than that I really like the team as is. Hopefully some other members can add something to this and you will have more advice and help on your team; good luck! -Happy Battling!
     
    Ok, so how is this:

    Magmortar@ Wise Glasses
    EV's 128 Def, 128 Speed, 128 Hp, 128 Attack
    Modest
    -Flamethrower
    -Thunder Bolt
    -Focus Blast
    -Sunny Day

    Metagross@ Life Orb
    EV's 252 SpDef, 128 Speed, 128 Attack
    Nature: Adamant
    -Meteor Mash
    -Thunder Punch
    -Earthquake
    -Agility

    Togekiss@ King Rock
    EV's Def-252, Sp.Attack-128, HP-128
    Nature: Modest
    -Air Slash
    -Aura Sphere
    -Thunder Wave
    -Roost

    Milotic@ Leftovers
    EV's Def: 252, HP-128, SpDef-128
    Nature: Bold
    -Ice Beam
    -Surf
    -Recover
    -Hypnosis

    Dusknoir@ Leftovers
    Evs: HP 252, SpDef 184, 72 Atk
    Nature: Careful
    - Shadow Punch
    - Pain Split
    - Will-O-Wisp
    - Mean Look

    Breloom@ Big Root/Focus Sash
    EV's Speed-252, Attack-156, HP-100
    Nature: Adamant
    -Spore
    -Seed Bomb
    -Brick Break/Drain Punch/Sky Uppercut
    -Stone Edge

    I cant decide on Breloom's Item. Can someone tell me which i should use?
     
    Uh.... Brelooms item is completely wrong. It uses toxic orb. gains back ALOT of health for him. And compliments his ability, keeping him from being paralyzed put to sleep etc
     
    So is this better?

    Magmortar@ Wise Glasses
    EV's 128 Def, 128 Speed, 128 Hp, 128 Attack
    Modest
    -Flamethrower
    -Thunder Bolt
    -Focus Blast
    -Sunny Day

    Metagross@ Life Orb
    EV's 252 SpDef, 128 Speed, 128 Attack
    Nature: Adamant
    -Meteor Mash
    -Thunder Punch
    -Earthquake
    -Agility

    Togekiss@ King Rock
    EV's Def-252, Sp.Attack-128, HP-128
    Nature: Modest
    -Air Slash
    -Aura Sphere
    -Thunder Wave
    -Roost

    Milotic@ Leftovers
    EV's Def: 252, HP-128, SpDef-128
    Nature: Bold
    -Ice Beam
    -Surf
    -Recover
    -Hypnosis

    Dusknoir@ Leftovers
    Evs: HP 252, SpDef 184, 72 Atk
    Nature: Careful
    - Shadow Punch
    - Pain Split
    - Will-O-Wisp
    - Mean Look

    Breloom@ Toxic Barb
    EV's Speed-252, Attack-156, HP-100
    Nature: Adamant
    -Spore
    -Seed Bomb
    -Brick Break/Drain Punch/Sky Uppercut
    -Stone Edge
     
    It is actually Toxic Orb. Good Luck!
    EDIT: I still like Focus Sash though!
     
    Damn I wanted to correct the toxic orb error :'(
    I don't know Togekiss' Speed but everyone has low speed.
     
    Focus Punch is always something to give to Berloom.

    Magmortar@ Leftovers
    -Flamethrower
    -Thunder Bolt
    -Confuse Ray
    -Will-o-Wisp

    A supportive moveset can do well.
     
    Are you sure about confuse ray? I dont see many people run Confuse Ray because it relies on luck.
     
    It has it's ups and down. But sometimes the risk is worth it. You had an defensive Magmortar. So it seems well to put it there.
     
    Oh an Focus punch would be the best thing on breloom
     
    Ok, so how is this:

    Magmortar@ Wise Glasses
    EV's 128 Def, 128 Speed, 128 Hp, 128 Attack
    Modest
    -Flamethrower
    -Thunder Bolt
    -Confuse Ray
    -Will-o-Wisp

    Metagross@ Life Orb
    EV's 252 SpDef, 128 Speed, 128 Attack
    Nature: Adamant
    -Meteor Mash
    -Thunder Punch
    -Earthquake
    -Agility

    Togekiss@ King Rock
    EV's Def-252, Sp.Attack-128, HP-128
    Nature: Modest
    -Air Slash
    -Aura Sphere
    -Thunder Wave
    -Roost

    Milotic@ Leftovers
    EV's Def: 252, HP-128, SpDef-128
    Nature: Bold
    -Ice Beam
    -Surf
    -Recover
    -Hypnosis

    Dusknoir@ Leftovers
    Evs: HP 252, SpDef 184, 72 Atk
    Nature: Careful
    - Shadow Punch
    - Pain Split
    - Will-O-Wisp
    - Mean Look

    Breloom@ Toxic Orb
    EV's Speed-252, Attack-156, HP-100
    Nature: Adamant
    -Spore
    -Seed Bomb
    -Focus Punch
    -Stone Edge
     
    It looks good, but I like Rock Slide over Stone Edge because it's more accurate, but still very good team. -Happy Battling!
     
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