warm welcome

[phantom_zangetsu]

heres another ne of my master pice its a bitsmaller than the one i made before but hope ya like it!:

Warm Welcome
i've gone away for so long
i wish to see you again
the trees that were once there
to greet me goodbye
and the dancing grass
that waves whenever i walk past them
i have worked hard and honest
just to make myself better
when i see you again on the same tree trunk
where you sit there patiently for me
the water in the pond glimmers
as we looked there
i miss the old days
the days when we were together

my life has changed a lot when i left
i see myself in a new world
a world of nothingness without you
the beautiful nature is nothing for me
when i can't see someone that makes me happy
but dont worry......

coz i'll be coming home soon
i shall see you again soon
the sunshine will greet me a warm welcome
when we are together
again.......

poem dedicated to the moms and dads abroad who misses their children.
and to those who have girlfriends or boyfriends far away from them.
may god give you hope to never give up your dreams!

so? what do you guys think?

 

[fallen_angel]

That was a good poem. :D I liked it. It was kindy sad though. :(

 

[phantom_zangetsu]

really? well thanks for tyhe comment eventhough i dont think it was supposed to be sad. thanks for the comment anyways.

 

[Witch Girl Pilar]

Man, that's so touching... hey! Why didn't you tell me yesterday?! Well, anyways, it's good!Hope to see more poems from you.

 

[phantom_zangetsu]

well, my fwend, you will. in fact i just finished another one for envier. ill post it here soon. osh, i wonder when your modem will be fixed.....