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Warriors:Inside A Cats Mind

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Dovefur pured and stretched as she slowly crawled out of the warrior's den. It was a wonderful warm day, and she felt good. She shook the bits of twigs and dirt on her fur off before trotting off to hunt. "Where are you going today, Dovefur?" The white deputy, Snowfur purred, watching Dovefur leave. "I'm heading to Snakerocks." Dovefur replied happily. She continued on. When she arrived, she could see an adder. She didn't think they'd be out right now. She was careful to avoid it as she leapt onto a rock near the adder. It slithered around the rock, then looked up and hissed, reveiling dripping poisonous fangs. Dovefur felt the fur down her back prickle, and she was too afraid to move. What had compelled her to come here? "I'm an idiot..." she thought, then batted at the snake when it closed it's mouth. It struck, and she dodged the bite. Dovefur then saw the opportunity, she put both front paws on top of the snake's head, and pinned it to the rock. She dug her claws into it's head, bent down and dug her teeth into it, breking it's spine. The snake wriggled a bit before falling limp. Dovefur purred as she licked the blood from the snake's wound and picked it up. Once back at camp, she dropped it on the fresh-kill pile and moved to the middle of the clearing and layed on her back, in the sun.
 

We crossed the border where ShadowClan ended and WindClan began. I felt the atmostphere change completely as we climbed onto the WindClan's plateau. The windcurrents were strong up here! I sniffed the air for a scent of prey but the winds took all the scent around so fast it was hard to tell where prey was.

"I've also heard there are hares all around WindClan territory." SilverStripe purred. "We could probably catch some."

"Not likely." I told him. "Let's stick to Barley's barn. The scents are two hard to track in these weather conditions."

"Very well." SilverStripe nodded and we carefully headed out. I noticed immediately how difficult it was to conceal yourself in the territory. There was hardly any vegetation to hide behind if you caught the scent of a patrol heading in your direction. It was a hazardous journey...but I was famished and craved the taste of plump mouse.

The scent of WindClan filled my lungs and my heart skipped a beat. It was a single cat scent, but I knew it was coming near...and we were in danger of both their clan and our clan.

"SilverStripe!" I whispered under my breath. "Do you smell it?"

He nodded simply in reply. We looked into the distance and saw a pearly white figure padding slowly near us...
 
Whew sorry I havent been on but my brothers are hogging the computer, and with school it is extreamly hard to get on.Ok where was I?

"Ah," I sighed "What a fish." As I lay back to clean myself a friend of mine entered the clearing.
"Hey Frostfoot!" I called "Come here!"
"I'm coming!" He shouted back."How you doing?" he asked" by the looks of thing you ate more than your share!"
"Hey I hunted half the fresh kill pile so dont tell me what I do or dont eat!" I snaped back.
"Whatever," Frostfoot said nonchalantly."Anyways I smelled a whif of ShadowClan over by the fourtrees heading up into WindClan territory."
"Really!?!" I said in mock surprise"Who cares, WindClan took our water before when they had plenty. I say good for ShadowClan."
 
Legend said:
[(OOC: I am sorry, but I have to pull out. I have two extra classes along with my regualar eight this year, so it is difficult to get online and keep on top of things. My deepest regrets about doing this. ><'')]
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That's okay, legend ;.; But we'll miss you.

Okay, instead of waiting for someone else to join, I will take GlazenPaw's place (it'll be difficult, but it's okay).

We will do this tomorrow!
 
Dovefur rolled onto her belly as her best friend, Jadeeye approached. The sleek black cat with dark green eyes an a white tipped tail sat down next to Dovefur, the sneke in her mouth. "Someone was dumb enough to go to snakerocks today. They got lucky, though!" She purred. Dovefur replied "Are you calling me dumb?", cheerfullnes filling her voice. "YOU caught this?" Jadeeye asked, dumbstruck, looking from the snake to it's captor. "Yup! It was easy!" Dovefur bragged. "Wow. You should have it, then." Her friend said, nudging the snake toward Dovefur with her paw. "I'll share it." Dovefur replied. The two cats began to eat, Dovefur with the tail and Jadeeye with the head.
 
Occ:Noooo I'll miss you legend. Ok well Rinny-Spoon-chan you can fill in for now but if someone wants to you let them play as Glazen paw.K?
Ic:After the conversation with my good ffriend I drifted to sleep. "FerilClaw" A voice in my mind called.
I ran toward the voice,suddenly I broke throught he brush and found the voice. "Who are you?" I asked.
 
~Mars~ said:
Occ:Noooo I'll miss you legend. Ok well Rinny-Spoon-chan you can fill in for now but if someone wants to you let them play as Glazen paw.K?
Ic:After the conversation with my good ffriend I drifted to sleep. "FerilClaw" A voice in my mind called.
I ran toward the voice,suddenly I broke throught he brush and found the voice. "Who are you?" I asked.
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[OCC: Just asking, Mars, but who is supposed to reply to that?]

<GlazenPaw>

I looked up into the sky and held my nose up high. The wind came into my direction as I caught the stench of ShadowClan. A low growl built up in my throat and I looked upon the horizon. I spotted a black dot and a silver dot out in the distance, far off from where I was. Nontheless, they were in WindClan territory. I crouched down hoping they couldn't see me. Cautiously, I padded over to them, hoping to keep this quiet.

<SmokeHeart>

"We're busted." SilverStripe whimpered. "They're coming right at us! There's no chance--"
"Just run away." I told him. "We should just turn tail and run out of the territory as fast as we can. She must have scented us by now and maybe even seen us. If we run, they will have no proof of it being us exactly."
"True, but...all the rest of WindClan would know of this. They would discuss it at FourTrees..."
"It's either that or being known immediately." I growled. "Let's move."
 
Occ: It was a rushed post Marsy was at school still and Marsy had to go soon. Besides it has an essence of mystery.~Marsy talks in third person now!

Ic:The cat was Lying on a smooth stone. His Jaw seemed crooked-probably from a wound that healed badly-showing that his life was rough.
"I am CrookedStar!" The cat exclaimed.
"CrookedStar!?!?!" I Gasped "Not the fomer RiverClan leader?"
"The same" He replied calmly. "An important thing for you to do is in need to be done soon."
"What?" I asked in astonishment.
"Meet Three others at the gathering. Say one thing and one thing only: Prophecy, to every cat and you will find each other. You are lucky normally StarClan speaks in riddles but this is important and it needs to be done fast!"He said hurridly in a hushed whisper.
"Yes sir! I wi-" I tried to reply, but as sudenly as he came he was gone.
"Come back!" I shouted fruitlessly.

Do you think Marsy did good? Her last RP died on the secome page, so she's worried.
 
*saves RP before it dies*

<GlazenPaw>
Right when I thought I had them, they disappeared somewhere off in the bushes. I looked down, defeated, and headed back to camp. (OCC: tryin' to keep it short -.-;)

<ShadowHeart>
We both dashed into the bushes, hoping that the WindClan cat could not sense us. I dashed along the border of the bush, hoping to find my way back to ShadowClan territory. I swung my head back and noticed that SilverStripe...he had disappeared.
"SilverStripe?" I asked the air. No respond came in advance. My heart raced, worry overcoming me. I pounded the ground, my head spinning around. What could've happened to him?
I bumped into something rough...something alive...It was a cat! I was hoping to find SilverStripe before me, but instead a pitch-black coat towered over me. It was a brooding cat with brooding features. The only thing that could truley be distinguished of him was his golden eyes.
"Greetings, young SmokeHeart." He breathed. "I am NightStar."
I tried to sustain my serenity as I looked into his dead eyes. "But...but you're dead."
"This is true." He nodded as he said this. "But it is also true that I came to see you. I come to tell you something vital. At the gathering, you will meet three cats. Tell every cat the word 'prophecy.' If they respond as if knowing what this is, they are the one's you are looking for. Good day to you."
I gaped in astonishment as he vanished away like black smoke in the wind. Just then, I heard SilverStripe calling my name.
 
Rin-Rin said:
*saves RP before it dies*
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[Occ: Phwee! Thank you Rinny Spoon chan]
I woke with a start the other warriors were grumbling.
"Honestly FerilClaw you think a cat could get some sleep in their own den but no even the elders can hear you!" My fur rose on the back of my neck but when I turned around it was only RiverPelt a recenly made warrior.
"I went the night patrol and when I got back I walked pas the elders den and heard them complaining about your sleep talk too, FerilClaw." PineFoot Meowed from a point from across the den where I could see her sleepy eyes in her raised head.
"Sorry, but when I'm asleep I can't just stuff some leaves in my mouth to keep you from hearing anywords I might utter!" I apologized Scornfully.
"Well I guess then instead you can go on a patrol rather than mouth off all day and get yourself off the list of those going to the gathering."Meowed a voice that sounded like MistyFoot.
"Yes ma'am." I replied respectfully and turned to face our leader LeopardStar.
Hiding the sock of her arrival from my eyes and inwardly hissing at my stupidity for mistaking her as MistyFoot.
The patrol traveled along the WindClan Border, replaced the scent markers, and were troting hapily through the underbrush until I detected a faint but fresh ShadowClan scent.
 
[OCC: Yikes! >< I've been detected!]

[GlazenPaw]
When I came back at camp, I felt foolish for not even bringing a scrap of food back. I was questioned much on why I was so down, but mostly on why I brought back no prey. I ingnored every question and headed straight for the apprentices' den, ready to take a nap.

[SmokeHeart]
"SmokeHeart! What's wrong with you?"
I looked around, confused. SilverStripe was looking at me with worried eyes. I felt dizzy...as if I were just in a trance.
"What?" I asked. The silver-pelted cat beckoned me forward. He told me what had happened.
"You just stopped all of the sudden...stock-still. You didn't move a muscle. I was frightened! What happened?"
I thought it wise to not tell of the strange visitation from Nightstar. I simply just shook my head and responded. "Nothing at all."
 
Nooo not my rp I cant let you die...:( I guess that it wasnt all thet great after all.
 
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