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Hey, hey, someone do me a big favor and read this. I'll love you forever~ <3 I wrote it last night- it's the intro to my latest story. XD Does it make any sense, is it any good? I'm hoping so. >_>
The only thing visible… Those black silhouetted figures... The light behind them defined their outlines, filled in by shadows that loomed in the mouth of the alleyway. Two other forms were huddled in the dim corner.
"Get behind me…" His soft voice, usually meek, was now iced over.
"Brother…"
"Shhh…" He gently shoved the girl closer to the wall, furthest from the light, furthest from danger. His hands were shaking, but he dared not allow his voice to waver. "No matter what… Run away." He felt her grasp the stiff white material of his shirt.
"No… I can't… Leave you…"
He had no time to argue. He ripped himself from her hold. "I will see you again." He allowed no uncertainty to taint his tone. "Until then… Don't miss me. Just wait, and don't forget. Somehow, even if we have to be reborn, even if it's a thousand years from now, I'll find you. And even if you don't remember who I am, I'll stay at your side. We'll be together again... That's our unchangeable fate."
He was thankful she couldn't see the fear on his face. He was glad she couldn't see the expression in his eyes. He knew what he must look like- he was peering straight at death. If she had seen his glazed over stare, she would've been even more frightened, and above all, he didn't want that.
He lunged forward, throat gripped by an invisible set of fingers and stomach upset by a churning sensation he worked to ignore. No matter what he was feeling, he couldn't let anything happen to her. If his blood stained the cement, maybe it would be enough to pay her way to escape. She was a part of him, and he a part of her. He would do anything it took to save at least that one fragile, precious half.
I'm so cheesy. -.-'' The intro is the cheesiest part of what I've written so far. Is it way too cheesy? Unbearably so? Or is it okay? >_> <_< >_<
