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Watch out for Zombrows! [WOFZ v1.0]

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(lol. you got ninja'd by our Silv. you should feel honored :P)

G: Holo, I'll leave you two to watch these guys. Song and I are going to her 'room' to remove that item. *flies toward where Song directed*
 
3. Song: oww... i think i sprained me wrist... ok, now left!
 
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Hey, hey, someone do me a big favor and read this. I'll love you forever~ <3 I wrote it last night- it's the intro to my latest story. XD Does it make any sense, is it any good? I'm hoping so. >_>

The only thing visible… Those black silhouetted figures... The light behind them defined their outlines, filled in by shadows that loomed in the mouth of the alleyway. Two other forms were huddled in the dim corner.

"Get behind me…" His soft voice, usually meek, was now iced over.

"Brother…"

"Shhh…" He gently shoved the girl closer to the wall, furthest from the light, furthest from danger. His hands were shaking, but he dared not allow his voice to waver. "No matter what… Run away." He felt her grasp the stiff white material of his shirt.

"No… I can't… Leave you…"

He had no time to argue. He ripped himself from her hold. "I will see you again." He allowed no uncertainty to taint his tone. "Until then… Don't miss me. Just wait, and don't forget. Somehow, even if we have to be reborn, even if it's a thousand years from now, I'll find you. And even if you don't remember who I am, I'll stay at your side. We'll be together again... That's our unchangeable fate."

He was thankful she couldn't see the fear on his face. He was glad she couldn't see the expression in his eyes. He knew what he must look like- he was peering straight at death. If she had seen his glazed over stare, she would've been even more frightened, and above all, he didn't want that.

He lunged forward, throat gripped by an invisible set of fingers and stomach upset by a churning sensation he worked to ignore. No matter what he was feeling, he couldn't let anything happen to her. If his blood stained the cement, maybe it would be enough to pay her way to escape. She was a part of him, and he a part of her. He would do anything it took to save at least that one fragile, precious half.

I'm so cheesy. -.-'' The intro is the cheesiest part of what I've written so far. Is it way too cheesy? Unbearably so? Or is it okay? >_> <_< >_<
 
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(Ooh. Me likey. I don't find it cheesy at all.)


G: Ok *turns left* Where to now?



(NINJA AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
 
0. (Sakura, that sounds really good!! hmmm, methinks ill do a gallery of stuff ive done in GIMP lately for ya, whaddaya say? ok?)
Spoiler:

(may include stuff youve seen before)

Song: next we go... uh... try thru that wall, right and up of right here!!
 
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Oooh. I especially like the second one. <3 Looking really nice, Silv. I've missed quite a bit, so I'm glad to see it now. :3
Also. Love you forever, too, for reading my random writing. XD
 
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(No problem Sakura. I actually found it very good. I WANT MOAR! XD)


G: THROUGH the wall? Ok... *goes through wall, expecting to smash it but instead glides right through* WOW. Now where?
 
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Lol. I have like, a bit more written, if you honestly wanna see it.
I also drew this really awesome picture of the two main characters, but it's too big to scan. XD It was also bloody looking.
 
0. (i thought youd like Pericci~ shes cute. Meow?!)

Song: straight ahead, the door with the music not, right next to the blob of swirling colors
 
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G: Ok. *enters room* Woah. It's... amazing! And really gorgeous! Is that a piano?! Woah. *remembers his mission* Song, do you see anything out of place?


(Sure Sakura. I'd love to read it, unless you don't want me to.)
 
(im on me wii. will take a while two post)

WINGS! You can do it! come on.
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G: You're absolutely positive? I don't want to smash it and it hurt you.
 
0. Wings: uhn... hmmm....?

**meanwhile**

Song: im sure... just try hard to destroy it completely, and not damage anything els... AAGH!!

Earth Silv: grrr... *ripping the head off a teddy bear*
 
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Wah, no, I'd be honored if you read it, Vanitas! : D I like it when people enjoy my writing. :3
This is all I have though, considering I started last night, but yah. There's some explaining to do as to who exactly is after them and all, but that comes later on. :/
So here goes:

Spoiler:
 
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G: Wha--? *sees Earth* Who are you? Why would you hurt your own sister? *smashes glass ball**let's Song out, flying her out of the room* Stay here. I'm gonna get rid of this one. *flies back in, grabbing Earth**flies out and a long distance from the room* Now that that is taken care of, let's REALLY dance, eh? *key blade reverts back to it's original self* Do you know what this is? It is a Keyblade. It can unlock anything, and it's ready to unleash your demise. *assumes fighting stance* Are you ready?
 
1. (Sakura... youre amazing. thats all i can say.)

Earth: you kill me, you throw this whole mind out of whack. i just know i was supposed to detain Song, since shes a friend of Wings... make sure she cant interfere!
 
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