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Watch out for Zombrows! [WOFZ v1.0]

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4. *sits on the floor, crying. her left eye, mutilated as it had been, is badly injured, bleeding, and unlikely curable* oooww... ah-OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWW! *puts hands against burning eye* m-make it stop!! *her small body is wracked with shudders*
 
Song! You're Eye is bleeding!

Nurse: What? did you jsut say her Eye is bleeding? We need to get her into the emergency room!

*Drags Song in the Emergency Room*

Doctor 2: Okay, What's wrong with this one?
Nurse: Her left eye! It's bleeding!
Doctor 2: not just that... it's also in terrible shape.

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Doctor: Well, We did what we could.... it's up to him. *Puts G in room 8888*


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me: I hope She will be okay.....

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6. Doctor 2: this is awful... and remarkable! ive never seen anything like it! i dont know if... theres anything we can do for her... well, that shuddering certainly isnt helping!! Nurse, get the anaesthesia!! we'll want to knock her out for this...

Nurse: right away. *gets the knockout stuff* here...

Doctor 2: *uses anaesthesia on Song*

Song: *knocked out* *sleeps peacefully*
 
Okay, I can't stay awake. Gnight, guys!
Gnight, Snowflake, Dogboy, Awesome, Ribl, Vanitas and....and....I don't remember....XD
I have what doctors call a short attention spa-Oh look! Shiny!
XD
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Can I have some o that Anaesthesia? I always sleep horribly when I've had 3 mugs o Coffee.....XD
 
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I hope Those two are going to be okay.

*Turns on TV* Oh cool A duel is going on. I wonder who is playing who....
 
G: *appears at Song's side* What happened? *is bleeding profusely again* I heard her screams... I fought.... I was... too... late..... *is exhausted**yells to Dogboy* Dogboy, do you mind fixing me up some more?


:::::Meanwhile:::::

Tyki: Oh-ho-ho. It seems that there was a little bit of me left inside G. And, what's even more interesting, is the fact that the leftover "me" became a Tease and attacked the Singer.

Earl: Oh? Tyki-pon, what did you do?

Tyki: It seems the leftover had a will of its own.... Interesting. Her eye is having an adverse reaction to the Antimatter in the Tease.


:::::Back at the hospital:::::

G:*still in tremendous pain**stays adamantly at Song's side, alert and unyielding* Never again Song. Never again......



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1. *asleep, a bandage covering her left eye* *breathing frantically, almost like shes having a nightmare, but thats not quite right*

Doctor 2: its unbelievable, really... i dont even know WHAT is going on with that eye of hers... im afraid theres nothing we can... nothing that can be done. well just have to wait and see.

(byebye Code!!! no bedbugs, mmkay?? YOU SLEEP WELL, YA HEAR?!?!)
 
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*hears Song's movements**has a pained look about him**to Doctor* What happened? Was there a butterfly? Where did it come from?! Tell me the truth.
 
3. Doctor 2: a butterfly? yes, i believe there was... a purple one... it came from the wing of the hospital you were in. im afraid thats all i know.
 
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Thank you. *pained look turns to a grimace**turns back to Song* I fought, you know. I fought to be here, to be your protector. To defend you from everything that dared attack you. I.... Fight. I want you to do the same. Fight whatever I did. Fight whatever I will do. Perhaps, if you were to hate me, I could better protect you. That seemed to work for Jo--*is stopped short at the thought of his brother* {I think I finally figured it out.... I couldn't protect Sai because he cared. The same goes for Joel and Father. Joel managed to protect me through my hatred.... I will do the same for Song.} Sleep peacefully, Song. *summons flute and begins playing a lullaby until Song calms down* Doctor, do you have a pen and some paper? I need to write a note.......
 
5. *right eye flutters open* u-uhn... G? *right eye opens wide as she quickly sits up in the bed* G!!! Doctor, is G alright? i-is he... *obviously panicking*

Doctor: calm down, miss!! the man you brought in earlier is fine... hes right here...

Sing: *sees G* G... oh thank arceus... thank arceus youre alright... *right eye starts crying from relief* thank arceus...
 
*hides pain* Yes, I'm all right. *hesitates* {You have to do this!} No thanks to you. I'm tired of this. I can't keep it up.... *turns head away to keep her from seeing his tears* I thought I could protect you, but you're just so.... I need to go. *gets up and begins to leave* Doctor, will you accompany me? I need a private word with you.... *Doctor nods and walks out with G, shutting the door behind him. Doctor, I realize I may be behaving inhumanely, but.... Make sure she doesn't do anything foolish. See to it our companions get here as soon as possible. I need to find Carbuncle...... *walks away, tears streaming* Carbuncle? Where are you? *fades from Doctor's sight*


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1. G!! w-wait!! G! *gets out of the bed, tripping over the blankets* *door closes just as she reaches it* G!! p-please dont leave me!!! n-no... it... really was all me fault... *sinks to the floor* G... im sorry... im sorry... im so stupid, im always getting in trouble... im always getting in the way... im sorry... *crying* *keeps saying "im sorry" quietly, clinging to the doorknob*

**meanwhile**
Carbuncle: G? what happened? G, youre crying!!
 
I need a final favor from you. Take me into Song's mind. I need to explain myself to Wings and Sky. I'm sure they're aware of what I've just done.... but I need to tell them why. I'm tired of always trying to protect them and failing. Maybe if I try the way Joel did, I can actually succeed. Just don't ask any questions, please. *is still crying, but now has a resolve on his face that cannot be broken*


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Please. Just take me in first. I will explain everything there.

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*appears in the collective Silv mind* WINGS! SKY!!! I need to speak to you urgently! First, I'm sure you'll both want to beat me to a pulp, so go ahead!


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Carbuncle :D /can't wait to get it in FFVII, already has Odin + Vincent, whom I renamed "Natsu" (come on, he's hot D:)
 
2. *a fist connects HARD with G's cheek* *Wings is holding an infuriated Sky back*

Sky: you *bleep*!!!!!! do you have any idea what youve just done?!?!?!?! youve just put Song in the WORST possible position!!! you think that she wont blame herself for this?? you think you didnt just shred her emotions to pieces?!??!?!

(idk if Buncle is in VII. i know its in VIII, but... *???*)
 
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