What do you think about my team

[Mozarch4]

here is my main team

typhlosion : flamethrower-fire blast-focub blast-hypear beam

dragonite : dragon rush -fly- dragon dance- roost

jolteon : discharge- thunder- shadow ball- thunder wave-

umbreon : payback- moon light- psychic- confuse ray

quagsire : waterfall- EQ- blizzard- strenght

nidoking : eart power- megahorn- poison jab- thunderbolt

so yeah thats my team tell me what u think guys and share ur ideas :)

 

[jab2033]

First off, your grammar sucks. No one will take you seriously if you don't use correct punctuation and spelling. You're not texting on your phone here.

Second, I'll try to help out with moves.

Typhlosion
-Flamethrower
-Focus Blast
-Swift
-Hidden Power Grass/Eruption

Fire Blast's accuracy is too low to be reliable, and Hyper Beam is just bad. Don't use moves that take a turn to charge, as that wasted turn can hurt you. If your HP type is Grass, then use that, if not, then Eruption will be good enough for the last slot. Typhlosion's movepool isn't all that great.

For Jolteon, use Thunderbolt over Discharge, and Signal Beam or Swift over Thunder.

Dragonite
-Dragon Dance
-Dragon Claw
-Earthquake
-Roost/Fire Punch

Dragon Claw is more accurate than Rush. Earthquake is better than Fly, though I understand you might need that for in-game. Alternatively, you could do Fire Punch over Roost.

Return over Psychic on Umbreon, and Toxic over Confuse Ray. I suggest giving Umbreon the Lagging Tail, as it ensures that Umbreon always goes last. Lagging Tail + STAB means that Payback gets 150 base power.

For Nidoking, use Earthquake, Megahorn, Thunderpunch, Ice Punch.

Earthquake for STAB, Megahorn to hit psychics, and Thunderpunch + Ice Punch give you nice Super-Effective coverage. They'll be more effective than Poison Jab and Thunderbolt. Mostly because Poison is a bad attacking type, and since 'king's a physical attacker, special moves like Thunderbolt don't work as well.

FYI, you also posted in the wrong section if you're not using this team competitively. There is an In-Game section you can post in.

 

[Aurafire]

First off, your grammar sucks. No one will take you seriously if you don't use correct punctuation and spelling. You're not texting on your phone here.

Regardless of his grammar, that doesn't mean you have the right to be rude. Leave your judgments to yourself please.

Anyway, moving to the In-Game forum.