Whats Wrong with Me?

[Sumomo & Kotoko]

Whats Wrong with Me?
Whats my porblem?

I'ev got friends all around me
Then why do I feel so lonely?

Their so loving and worm
But on the inside I'm torn!

Is it cause of my mother and father?
This question I ask, I shoulden't even bother...

This life of mine, where is it going?
Will I ever find out, is it even worth knowing?

This problem of mine, is it near its ending?
Thats a stupid question, its only the begining!

These questions, they came over me like cancer.
Am I ever going to know the answer?
.................​

 

[Charizard_Fire_God]

Eeee! Tch, that is so deep, I LOVE it! ^_^
An' tha rhyme's SOOOO... perfect too! ^_^

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Very well done RP. Very well done!

 

[Sumomo & Kotoko]

Thank you both very much. :classic:

 

[Midori Chi]

Very nice! ^^ Anything that rhymes, is cool! ^^ Also, all of your poems are good! ^^