[Other] WHATS WRONG WITH MY SCRIPT?

[Lancekoijer32497]

Please help me

#dynamic 0x800000

#org @start
lock
faceplayer
checkflag 0x801
if 0x1 goto @give
msgbox @givepokemon 0x6
if 0x0 goto @set
release
end

#org @give
givepokemon 0x85 0x5 0x0 0x0 0x0 0x0
fanfare 0x13E
msgbox @received 0x4
waitfanfare
closeonkeypress
setflag 0x828
msgbox @Nickname
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 call @name
msgbox @Takegoodcare 0x6
release
end

#org @set
setflag 0x801
msgbox @what 0x6
release
end

#org @name
call 0x1A74EB
return

#org @givepokemon
= Hi! [player]! I have a pokemon\nhere!

#org @What
= What? You dont have yet pokemon\nmenu?

#org @received
= Thats your starter pokemon! An\nEEVEE!

#org @Nickname
= You know its fun to give your\npokemon a nickname! Would you like\lto give anickname on your new\lEEVEE?

#org @Takegoodcare
= When I was young! I met a strange\ntrainer and he said that I must\ltake good care on that Pokemon, I\lnever knew that Ill give it to a\lspecial trainer!

whats wrong with that?

 

[Le pug]

Please help me

#dynamic 0x800000

#org @start
lock
faceplayer
checkflag 0x801
if 0x1 goto @give
if 0x0 goto @set
release
end

#org @give
givepokemon 0x85 0x5 0x0 0x0 0x0 0x0
fanfare 0x13E
msgbox @received 0x4
waitfanfare
closeonkeypress
setflag 0x828
msgbox @Nickname
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 call @name
msgbox @Takegoodcare 0x6
release
end

#org @set
setflag 0x801
msgbox @what 0x6
checkflag 0x801
if 0x1 goto @give
release
end

#org @name
call 0x1A74EB
return

#org @givepokemon
= Hi! [player]! I have a pokemon\nhere!

#org @What
= What? You dont have yet pokemon\nmenu?

#org @received
= Thats your starter pokemon! An\nEEVEE!

#org @Nickname
= You know its fun to give your\npokemon a nickname! Would you like\lto give anickname on your new\lEEVEE?

#org @Takegoodcare
= When I was young! I met a strange\ntrainer and he said that I must\ltake good care on that Pokemon, I\lnever knew that Ill give it to a\lspecial trainer!

whats wrong with that?

Updated your script in the quote

 

[Spherical Ice]

Could you give a brief description of what exactly the script is trying to do? I have a feeling you're including unnecessary parts. Is this meant to be the first time the player gets a Pokémon?

 

[Le pug]

Please answer my question... please

I just did -.- it should work

 

[Lancekoijer32497]

I just did -.- it should work

True? If that so, how did you put that? and what happened? Does the script gave you an eevee and st your pokemon menu?

Could you give a brief description of what exactly the script is trying to do? I have a feeling you're including unnecessary parts. Is this meant to be the first time the player gets a Pokémon?

yah! ^_^ that's the quick starter....

 

[Spherical Ice]

You're really not being clear as to what you want this script to do, but I'm going to take a wild guess and assume you just want to check if the player has a Pokémon or not, and if they don't to give them a Pokémon and activate the Pokémon menu:

#dynamic 0x800000
#include stditems.rbh
#include stdpoke.rbh

'---------------
#org @start
lock
faceplayer
checkflag 0x200
if 0x0 goto @snippet1
msgbox @string1 MSG_NORMAL '"What? You dont have yet pokemon\nm..."
release
end

'---------------
#org @snippet1
msgbox @string2 MSG_NORMAL '"Hi! [player]! I have a pokemon\nhe..."
givepokemon PKMN_EEVEE 0x5 ITEM_NONE 0x0 0x0 0x0
fanfare 0x13E
msgbox @string3 MSG_KEEPOPEN '"Thats your starter pokemon! An\nEE..."
waitfanfare
closeonkeypress
setflag 0x828
msgbox @string4 MSG_YESNO '"You know its fun to give your\npok..."
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 call @snippet2
msgbox @string5 MSG_NORMAL '"When I was young! I met a strange\..."
setflag 0x200
release
end

'---------------
#org @snippet2
call @snippet3
return

'---------------
#org @snippet3
fadescreen 0x1
special 0x9E
waitstate
return


'---------
' Strings
'---------
#org @string1
= What? You dont have yet pokemon\nmenu?

#org @string2
= Hi! [player]! I have a pokemon\nhere!

#org @string3
= Thats your starter pokemon! An\nEEVEE!

#org @string4
= You know its fun to give your\npokemon a nickname! Would you like\lto give anickname on your new\lEEVEE?

#org @string5
= When I was young! I met a strange\ntrainer and he said that I must\ltake good care on that Pokemon, I\lnever knew that Ill give it to a\lspecial trainer!

Note that, as it is, @string1 makes no sense at all: I suggest rewording it to be more like "Hi [player]! How is that EEVEE faring you?" or something.