Psycho Bugler
Jew Extrordinaire!
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Good morning, everyone. This is my first post here. It's been a very long time since I've posted any of my creative literature anywhere. This is a fanfiction I started when I was 16. I'm 21 now and I've grown a lot as both an author and a person since then. I'm re-editing it as we speak. The first 40 chapters were written over the course of the summer before my 11th grade year.
The reason I made this story PG-13 since it's original conception is because I've grown more, and I've added a gay love theme between two of the main characters, because I tend to write better when I base characters off of myself as well as the conflicts, turmoils, and dilemmas I experience as a human. Also, same gender love is not a theme commonly exploited in non-pornographic fan fiction. I also prefer to write with varying degrees of strong and colorful language.
I promise you that I'm not as much of a pretentious jerk as my previous two paragraphs have been. I'm actually very immature, fun to talk to, and goofy. So if you managed to trudge through the first two paragraphs of this post then kudos to you!
Anyway, I hope you enjoy my story that I've created in the Pokemon universe. Feel free to criticize my writing style whenever you wish. I'm completely open to suggestions and advice as well being made aware of mistakes that I didn't catch the first time. Thanks again and enjoy!
Chapter 1: The Mistaken Thief
It was a clichéd dark and foggy night and a man cloaked in black walked alone in the streets of Goldenrod. With a glimpse, one could tell he was followed by a tall figure unidentifiable in the dark. It looked like it had a gerbil tail, a gargantuan one at that, which was only noticeable here and there as it crept through the shadows.
They walked west toward a small building looking like a subway entrance. There was a flash of red light and the taller tailed figure disappeared into the fist of the cloaked man. He snapped and four more men appeared from behind bushes, signs and other objects; all garbed in long black clothing.
They walked down the stairs and were confronted by a large door that descended from the ceiling. The first man looked at his comrades and nodded. One of them produced something from his cloak and there was another blinding red flash. A sixth figure appeared, seeming to be composed of gas and air. The man who seemed to have summoned this creature whispered something to it. It looked at the man and moved toward the door, as it collided with it, it disappeared. Ten seconds later, the door lifted and the same creature hovered in the darkness. The man took out the device which made it appear and the flash occurred again-the ghostly being was gone.
They took three steps into the large, dark complex and stopped. Another man began to fumble through his pockets until he found a round ball. He clicked a button and it opened. A large, orange dragon shaped creature appeared. Its tale had a flame at the end which lit a fair portion of the room. They could see down a hallway that stretched for almost half-a-mile where it met a large door identical to the one they just broke into.
In the faint light, one could tell that all of the men wore cloth masks across their nose and mouth with their dark eyes visible. All were clothed identically.
They began walking south through the tunnel. There were shops and other rooms throughout the hall such as a barber shop, food shops, jewelry shops, clothing shops and the list could go on. Half way through the tunnel, they turned left into a hallway with a door at the end.
The leader stepped aside so the others could pass him. He looked around and backed into the hallway as if to check if anyone was there to watch them. They made it to the door and the leader reached for his neck to grab a golden chain with a large ring and attached were at least twenty keys of varying sizes. He fingered through the keys and found the one he was looking for. He unlocked the door and proceeded through with his team.
They had entered a large room with boxes everywhere and other men and women wearing suits with big letter R's. They all saluted the leader who took off his hood and mask to reveal a face with a pale complexion overpowered by small, dark eyes covered by flowing slick black hair. He looked up to the others in the room already and acknowledged them. They continued with their work. Some carrying boxes full of supplies (usually dynamite) or telling large humanoid creatures called Machoke to carry boxes toward a tunnel leading to the north east which had been equipped with an underground railway with carts powered by floating magnets able to zip off at top speed.
One of the men with a jumpsuit with the large 'R' on it approached the unmasked man. "We are ready now. The raiding party is waiting at the end of the tunnel."
"Excellent," replied the man. "Inform Giovanni that we are ready to move in and that we will be at his hideout soon with the plans."
"Yes, Executive Stevens." The man in the jumpsuit ran off to one of the many rooms lining the tunnel."
Brett Stevens, the very infamously young, but diligent Rocket Executive turned to the four others with the masks and said, "Go join the others at the end of the tunnel. I'll join you shortly." They nodded and boarded trolleys before being whisked down the tunnel.
Brett walked up to a person in a three piece suit accompanied by a woman in the near same clothing. "Are all the Electrode in place, Brian?" Brett asked the well dressed red haired and bearded man.
"Yes, they are," replied Brian. "They will use Explosion when you request them to. There are about fifteen Weezing and Koffing to come in behind them and release Smokescreen and Smog to cover our entrance. All the Pokémon are ready to attack, too. The sequence will begin on your command."
"Very well," said Brett. He boarded a magnet powered car with Brian and his assistant so they could proceed down the tunnel. After a half hour of dark and quick silence, they appeared into a large room filled with men and women in jumpsuits and around a hundred of the men cloaked in black similar to Brett's.
"Good work, Brian," Brett muttered. "Someone will need to recover the Electrode so they can be healed later."
Brett's surrounding subordinates acknowledged his order with nods, waves, thumbs-up or a short bow. Brett looked up to a large opening. Victreebell were under the opening ready to cast their vines to create ladders for everyone. All of the flying Pokémon grabbed the heavier Pokémon with their claws or fangs gently ready to fly them up. All the people put oxygen masks on and Brett checked everything one last time. "Electrode! Explosion, now!"
Loud blasts echoed around the cavern. Brett ducked down to cover his ears and shield his eyes. He looked up when the noise died down to see that the opening above the room had expanded and was completely engulfed by smoke and dust. Brett finally slipped his mask on as the dust and debris descended upon him. The Victreebell shot vines up and Weezing ascended through the hole. A mass of Pokemon and trainers flew upwards through the smoke and smog that the gaseous Pokemon were leaving behind. Brett took a ball out of his pocket and an Aerodactyl appeared. He jumped onto its back and flew up through the hole, passing everyone climbing the vines.
Brett reached the top of the gaping hole in the ground to emerge inside a mansion belonging to Eugene McStewart, a Pokémon scientist and inventor of the masterball. He sent out all of his Pokémon: Rapidash, Cloyster, Raichu and Lucario. There was another Pokémon. It was shaped like a human with large tail, but it too was cloaked in black and floated three feet above the ground. It was the same figure that was with him when he was in Goldenrod's streets. Brett ran down a large hallway with marble flooring; statues, paintings and portraits lined the mahogany walls. He found a staircase. His original four followers were right behind him along with his and their Pokémon. Brett looked up and saw a man wearing nothing but a bathrobe and had a Ninetales beside him. It was Eugene McStewart himself.
One of Brett's men ordered his Steelix to attack the Ninetales. The man at the top of the stairs quickly yelled to the Ninetales: "Use confuse ray!" The Ninetales jumped up from the stairs, evaded the swish of the tale that the Steelix threw at it. Instead, the Steelix's large tail hit a support beam and came crashing down. The house began to creak. Ninetales shot a ray of light quickly into Steelix who began flinging itself around randomly. The man who ordered it to attack called it back into its Pokeball, less they all be crushed underneath the structure of the mansion.
Brett turned to his Rapidash, "Use Fire Spin. Bring this house down." The Rapidash looked up and opened its mouth. A blazing inferno engulfed the top floor. Brett turned to the men behind him, "Find the laboratory and contact me via Pokégear when you do or if anything comes up."
"Yes, Executive Stevens," they replied and ran off in different directions.
"Do you know who I am?" asked Brett to the man at the top of the stairs.
"Yes, I know you are an enemy and I want you all out of my house."
"We'll leave if you give us the designs of the master ball."
"Or if I get you out first.
"We'll see. Cloyster, attack his Ninetales with Hydropump." The Cloyster shot out a large blast of water to the Ninetales. It evaded the Cloyster's attack as well.
"Ninetales! Use flamethrower!" The Ninetales emitted a flame from its mouth not as large as the Rapidash's firespin but much more dense and effective against a smaller target. The Cloyster was knocked back against the wall behind it, badly injured.
"How?" exclaimed Brett.
"You, obviously have much to learn about Pokémon. I could help you. Leave Team Rocket which only feeds you lies. I can help you be a better trainer. Giovanni will betray you after you satisfy his needs."
Brett was shocked. No one had ever spoken to them as if they knew better than he did. No one except for... "I know about type advantages and disadvantages, you jackass! I'm just amazed you beat my Cloyster in one blow. You are mistaken, however. Giovanni is the greatest man alive. He helped me get where I am today, his right hand side. I will restore Giovanni's name to its former and rightful glory so that all will answer to him!"
"Giovanni only helped you because he realized your potential. As do I. You could be great. It's not all about stealing Pokémon for others. You should know yourself that catching Pokémon is much more satisfying than stealing them. You feel like you accomplished something."
"I raised all of these from an egg or a fossil. I don't need your help. I don't need anyone's help." Brett grabbed his Pokéball and called back his Cloyster. He turned to the Pokémon behind him cloaked in black.
"Mewtwo! Destroy them!"
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I hope you enjoyed it! It'll pick up really fast soon I promise!
Again, please feel free to critique me. I appreciate your input as peers!
The reason I made this story PG-13 since it's original conception is because I've grown more, and I've added a gay love theme between two of the main characters, because I tend to write better when I base characters off of myself as well as the conflicts, turmoils, and dilemmas I experience as a human. Also, same gender love is not a theme commonly exploited in non-pornographic fan fiction. I also prefer to write with varying degrees of strong and colorful language.
I promise you that I'm not as much of a pretentious jerk as my previous two paragraphs have been. I'm actually very immature, fun to talk to, and goofy. So if you managed to trudge through the first two paragraphs of this post then kudos to you!
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Anyway, I hope you enjoy my story that I've created in the Pokemon universe. Feel free to criticize my writing style whenever you wish. I'm completely open to suggestions and advice as well being made aware of mistakes that I didn't catch the first time. Thanks again and enjoy!
Chapter 1: The Mistaken Thief
It was a clichéd dark and foggy night and a man cloaked in black walked alone in the streets of Goldenrod. With a glimpse, one could tell he was followed by a tall figure unidentifiable in the dark. It looked like it had a gerbil tail, a gargantuan one at that, which was only noticeable here and there as it crept through the shadows.
They walked west toward a small building looking like a subway entrance. There was a flash of red light and the taller tailed figure disappeared into the fist of the cloaked man. He snapped and four more men appeared from behind bushes, signs and other objects; all garbed in long black clothing.
They walked down the stairs and were confronted by a large door that descended from the ceiling. The first man looked at his comrades and nodded. One of them produced something from his cloak and there was another blinding red flash. A sixth figure appeared, seeming to be composed of gas and air. The man who seemed to have summoned this creature whispered something to it. It looked at the man and moved toward the door, as it collided with it, it disappeared. Ten seconds later, the door lifted and the same creature hovered in the darkness. The man took out the device which made it appear and the flash occurred again-the ghostly being was gone.
They took three steps into the large, dark complex and stopped. Another man began to fumble through his pockets until he found a round ball. He clicked a button and it opened. A large, orange dragon shaped creature appeared. Its tale had a flame at the end which lit a fair portion of the room. They could see down a hallway that stretched for almost half-a-mile where it met a large door identical to the one they just broke into.
In the faint light, one could tell that all of the men wore cloth masks across their nose and mouth with their dark eyes visible. All were clothed identically.
They began walking south through the tunnel. There were shops and other rooms throughout the hall such as a barber shop, food shops, jewelry shops, clothing shops and the list could go on. Half way through the tunnel, they turned left into a hallway with a door at the end.
The leader stepped aside so the others could pass him. He looked around and backed into the hallway as if to check if anyone was there to watch them. They made it to the door and the leader reached for his neck to grab a golden chain with a large ring and attached were at least twenty keys of varying sizes. He fingered through the keys and found the one he was looking for. He unlocked the door and proceeded through with his team.
They had entered a large room with boxes everywhere and other men and women wearing suits with big letter R's. They all saluted the leader who took off his hood and mask to reveal a face with a pale complexion overpowered by small, dark eyes covered by flowing slick black hair. He looked up to the others in the room already and acknowledged them. They continued with their work. Some carrying boxes full of supplies (usually dynamite) or telling large humanoid creatures called Machoke to carry boxes toward a tunnel leading to the north east which had been equipped with an underground railway with carts powered by floating magnets able to zip off at top speed.
One of the men with a jumpsuit with the large 'R' on it approached the unmasked man. "We are ready now. The raiding party is waiting at the end of the tunnel."
"Excellent," replied the man. "Inform Giovanni that we are ready to move in and that we will be at his hideout soon with the plans."
"Yes, Executive Stevens." The man in the jumpsuit ran off to one of the many rooms lining the tunnel."
Brett Stevens, the very infamously young, but diligent Rocket Executive turned to the four others with the masks and said, "Go join the others at the end of the tunnel. I'll join you shortly." They nodded and boarded trolleys before being whisked down the tunnel.
Brett walked up to a person in a three piece suit accompanied by a woman in the near same clothing. "Are all the Electrode in place, Brian?" Brett asked the well dressed red haired and bearded man.
"Yes, they are," replied Brian. "They will use Explosion when you request them to. There are about fifteen Weezing and Koffing to come in behind them and release Smokescreen and Smog to cover our entrance. All the Pokémon are ready to attack, too. The sequence will begin on your command."
"Very well," said Brett. He boarded a magnet powered car with Brian and his assistant so they could proceed down the tunnel. After a half hour of dark and quick silence, they appeared into a large room filled with men and women in jumpsuits and around a hundred of the men cloaked in black similar to Brett's.
"Good work, Brian," Brett muttered. "Someone will need to recover the Electrode so they can be healed later."
Brett's surrounding subordinates acknowledged his order with nods, waves, thumbs-up or a short bow. Brett looked up to a large opening. Victreebell were under the opening ready to cast their vines to create ladders for everyone. All of the flying Pokémon grabbed the heavier Pokémon with their claws or fangs gently ready to fly them up. All the people put oxygen masks on and Brett checked everything one last time. "Electrode! Explosion, now!"
Loud blasts echoed around the cavern. Brett ducked down to cover his ears and shield his eyes. He looked up when the noise died down to see that the opening above the room had expanded and was completely engulfed by smoke and dust. Brett finally slipped his mask on as the dust and debris descended upon him. The Victreebell shot vines up and Weezing ascended through the hole. A mass of Pokemon and trainers flew upwards through the smoke and smog that the gaseous Pokemon were leaving behind. Brett took a ball out of his pocket and an Aerodactyl appeared. He jumped onto its back and flew up through the hole, passing everyone climbing the vines.
Brett reached the top of the gaping hole in the ground to emerge inside a mansion belonging to Eugene McStewart, a Pokémon scientist and inventor of the masterball. He sent out all of his Pokémon: Rapidash, Cloyster, Raichu and Lucario. There was another Pokémon. It was shaped like a human with large tail, but it too was cloaked in black and floated three feet above the ground. It was the same figure that was with him when he was in Goldenrod's streets. Brett ran down a large hallway with marble flooring; statues, paintings and portraits lined the mahogany walls. He found a staircase. His original four followers were right behind him along with his and their Pokémon. Brett looked up and saw a man wearing nothing but a bathrobe and had a Ninetales beside him. It was Eugene McStewart himself.
One of Brett's men ordered his Steelix to attack the Ninetales. The man at the top of the stairs quickly yelled to the Ninetales: "Use confuse ray!" The Ninetales jumped up from the stairs, evaded the swish of the tale that the Steelix threw at it. Instead, the Steelix's large tail hit a support beam and came crashing down. The house began to creak. Ninetales shot a ray of light quickly into Steelix who began flinging itself around randomly. The man who ordered it to attack called it back into its Pokeball, less they all be crushed underneath the structure of the mansion.
Brett turned to his Rapidash, "Use Fire Spin. Bring this house down." The Rapidash looked up and opened its mouth. A blazing inferno engulfed the top floor. Brett turned to the men behind him, "Find the laboratory and contact me via Pokégear when you do or if anything comes up."
"Yes, Executive Stevens," they replied and ran off in different directions.
"Do you know who I am?" asked Brett to the man at the top of the stairs.
"Yes, I know you are an enemy and I want you all out of my house."
"We'll leave if you give us the designs of the master ball."
"Or if I get you out first.
"We'll see. Cloyster, attack his Ninetales with Hydropump." The Cloyster shot out a large blast of water to the Ninetales. It evaded the Cloyster's attack as well.
"Ninetales! Use flamethrower!" The Ninetales emitted a flame from its mouth not as large as the Rapidash's firespin but much more dense and effective against a smaller target. The Cloyster was knocked back against the wall behind it, badly injured.
"How?" exclaimed Brett.
"You, obviously have much to learn about Pokémon. I could help you. Leave Team Rocket which only feeds you lies. I can help you be a better trainer. Giovanni will betray you after you satisfy his needs."
Brett was shocked. No one had ever spoken to them as if they knew better than he did. No one except for... "I know about type advantages and disadvantages, you jackass! I'm just amazed you beat my Cloyster in one blow. You are mistaken, however. Giovanni is the greatest man alive. He helped me get where I am today, his right hand side. I will restore Giovanni's name to its former and rightful glory so that all will answer to him!"
"Giovanni only helped you because he realized your potential. As do I. You could be great. It's not all about stealing Pokémon for others. You should know yourself that catching Pokémon is much more satisfying than stealing them. You feel like you accomplished something."
"I raised all of these from an egg or a fossil. I don't need your help. I don't need anyone's help." Brett grabbed his Pokéball and called back his Cloyster. He turned to the Pokémon behind him cloaked in black.
"Mewtwo! Destroy them!"
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I hope you enjoyed it! It'll pick up really fast soon I promise!
Again, please feel free to critique me. I appreciate your input as peers!
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