Sure, Kat! ^.^ Welcome to the club! ^.^ I'm so lurved..I'm not worthy o.o
EDIT: I wrote a poem last night..will ya'll critique it? XD
I'm sorry if the first one causes controversy X.x I was bored.
The first is called "Is it worth it?"..some of it rhymes..but some dosen't XD
Some call me a murderer
Others call me a saint.
When I think about what I'm doing
I just want to faint.
I may be fighting for my country
but does my country fight for me?
The president dosen't send us equipment
our tanks have no armor protecting them
to top it all off, when we die,
we simply become "casualties of war".
Plus, we're turned into a statistic
and our families completely forgotten.
We may get a five second mention
on your local six o clock news
but after that, we aren't mentioned
anywhere by anyone besides our families and friends.
I ask myself every day
whether or not it is worth it
the answer is simple and always the same
as long as my country's safety is threatened
I will continue to fight,
regardless of the facts.
XP Critique please.