Without You [Poem/Song]

[FinalFlare]

Without You

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The times we shared are distant memories
The happiness you bought is fading away
The day you left me my heart was breaking
As I watched you walk away
Out of my life
Out of my mind
Out of my soul
You left me behind

I watched you go
Tried to stop the tears
From breaking free
All the years you stuck by me
And now you're gone
I don't have the strength to carry on
Without you

But now it's too late
It seems that our fate
Has pulled us apart
As you walk on home
I go on alone
To make a new start

Why did you leave
Why did you go
You were my life
You left me alone
Out of my mind
Out of my soul
You left me behind
Why did you go
Why did you go?

I wait everyday
Wait for your return
To see you again
To get what I yearn
To look into your eyes
And into your soul
To wipe away your tears
Why'd you have to go?

Battles are fought
Win, lose or draw
But none of that matters
'Cos you're not here anymore
Why can't you come back?
Why can't you return?
Why do I have to wait?
With every badge that I earn,
I think of you
See your smile and your laugh
Thinking about it now
I know I was daft
To just let you go
To leave from my life
Out of my soul
Out of my mind
Why did you go
And leave me behind?

As I watch the sky
I think of your face
Your aquamarine eyes
In another place
Can you be as lonely as me?
When will you return
Why can't you see?

I close my eyes
I'm at your front door
All I see is you
I'm not alone anymore
Into my life
Into my mind
Into my soul
Please don't leave me behind

I open my eyes
And you're gone once more
Another daydream
You're the one I adore
Do you miss me?
As much as I miss you?
Is this a dream
Or something so true
I love you
I need you

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((¸¸.·´ ..·´ -:¦:-
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Comments are appreciated! Thank-you ^^
~ FinalFlare

 

[Maestro]

It has a good moral, and it's very moving. I liked reading it, but as a song, it's hard to put to a tune. I'd suggest using short and snappy words or split up the longer ones, and change the words, like aquamarine to Deep Blue, or something. But no, It's very good.