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[Logmon1]

Ok when I found some sprits here I got an idea for a comic. here is the first one:

C&C

 

[Allstories]

The problem with many sprite comics is that people get access to some sprites and automatically decide 'LOL! I'LL MAEK A COMIC! IT WILL BE HILAREOUS BCUZ IT USEZ T3H SPRITEZ! OMGLOLZ.' Your comic is pretty poorly drawn, and it's lacking in pretty much every area. It's not very funny, it's not necessarily that exciting, and it's no visual achievement. You gotta plan out your comics a little better before you jump right into them and make things up as you go, and I don't just mean you, I mean EVERYBODY. TAKE A HINT, ALREADY. GAWD.

 

[Logmon1]

Don't worry the secend one Will have a bit of a fight between Logan and Monic.

 

[Allstories]

....This doesn't really do a good job of reassuring me. :\

 

[Logmon1]

No I don't think Chaos is Monic if thAts what your saying. And it will be a cool DBZ like fight.

Edit:

 

[armadilloHD]

That fight was sooooo short and god moddy :/

 

[Logmon1]

How was it "god moddy"?

 

[armadilloHD]

You beat him WAY too easily, metal sonic isn't defeated in that small amount of panel time.

 

[Goatman56]

Needs alot of work really. Yeah and Metal Sonic really isn't that weak.

 

[Logmon1]

Well I thought if he was sliced by a sword he would explode. In my sonic game I beat him in like 3 hits.

 

[Shinin]

I have no idea what the hell is going on in the comic. And there are spelling mistakes. 2.5/10.

 

[Logmon1]

Ok time for my first saga. The Gint Monic saga:

Yes I know the closeup of Logan sucks.

 

[O]

Yes I know the closeup of Logan sucks.

No it doesn't. The whole comic does. You have various spelling errors, you should run your script through a spellchecker, You're probably wondering HUH? Yes, I know, you do your comic's dialogue at the same time as the comic. So you're doing it at the spot. Right? And also, why the heck is Logan standing in mid air? The backgrounds are bad, go to www.vgmaps.com to find some. I'm sick and tired of badly drawn paint manipulated backgrounds. Heck, LOOK AT THE BRIGHT COLORS.

 

[Logmon1]

why the heck is Logan standing in mid air?

He's like a dbz char. So he can fly.

The backgrounds are bad, go to www.vgmaps.com to find some

I spent five hours on it (The house) The rest I got form that site that AmradiloDH keeps recaminding.

 

[armadilloHD]

He's like a dbz char. So he can fly.

I spent five hours on it (The house) The rest I got form that site that AmradiloDH keeps recaminding.

Yay logmon is a flying hipocrit >>

 

[Logmon1]

Yay logmon is a flying hipocrit >>

What dose that mean?!

 

[lugia65]

You don't know what a hypocrite is? HA!!!!


quote dictionary.com

hypocrite
n : a person who professes beliefs and opinions that he does not hold

Still don't understand it?


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And the transition between your "Backgrounds" is horredous...

 

[Logmon1]

You don't know what a hypocrite is? HA!!!!


quote dictionary.com

hypocrite
n : a person who professes beliefs and opinions that he does not hold

Still don't understand it?


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And the transition between your "Backgrounds" is horredous...

No. It sounds like a religon or somtin. I don't have a religon.

 

[armadilloHD]

No. It sounds like a religon or somtin. I don't have a religon.

Technically you were flaming me about showing people that site. THEN you use it and BLATANTLY admitted it >>

 

[Logmon1]

Technically you were flaming me about showing people that site. THEN you use it and BLATANTLY admitted it >>

I did it to make you happy!