GuardianofAura
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Hello to all! I am writing a Fan-Fiction called "World of Aura".
It's about a Riolu who was born differently from the rest of his kind, and his closest friend is taken away from him. He needs to learn how to become strong if he is able to face up to the threat which puts the world in danger. It takes place in a new world not mentioned in any other story.
This book was meant to be an idea for a game i wish to create when i'm able to, but i decided to write it as a book. It is quite a big book so far. I believe it is an amazing read for any Lucario/Riolu fan or any pokemon fan. Heck, it is even good for someone who has no clue what pokemon is. In my book, i have not once mentioned the word "Pokemon".
Please give me any comments and criticism you have about my book, good or bad, so i can aim to improve it as much as possible. If you find any mistakes, let me know so i can correct them. I will be writing more daily, so you can expect a few updates to this after around every chapter i write. My book is not even close to being finished, but i would like to get ideas for what i should do next from all of you. If you do choose to read it, then thanks. If you don't, that's fine. Thanks for taking your time to read this, and i hope you choose to read my book! Just scroll down to read it.
P.S. Looking for an illustrator for my book. PM me if you can help, greatly appreciated!
World of Aura
The story so far…
My name is Aura. I am a creature known as a Riolu. But I'm… different from the others. It's a long story. Let me first tell you about my kind.
We Riolu are special creatures who live in the Rukari Mountains, and are gifted in the way of the aura. We can control aura and use it in many unimaginable ways. For example, we can sense the feelings of all living things, we can turn aura into energy which can be used for fighting or recovery, we can create plant life from nothing and many more amazing things. I'm not too good at growing things though.
Riolu all hatch from their eggs on a rare occurrence, once the moon blocks the sun. Or as my Father calls it, a Solar Eclipse. This is when the aura becomes the strongest it can possibly be, and is visible to all. A ceremony takes place once the Riolu hatch to welcome the new life into the world. However, this ceremony only occurs once every 20 years.
Riolu are naturally blue and black, and all look alike in a natural way. We can tell each other apart though by the feeling of each other's aura, or if we decide to wear different things like a flower or a scarf. I don't need to wear any of these things because… well… I'm kind of easy to spot out in a crowd.
Once Riolu find their one true soul-mate, they can change form to what is traditionally known by the name of "Lucario". This evolutionary change can only be made once the sun is in the sky and two Riolu hold true friendship. It is often done in groups, but not always. A group of Riolu would wake up early, just before sunrise, and find a clear view of the sky. Then, they would meditate next to their partner, holding hands, and wait for the sun to rise. Apparently, it is a brilliant sight to witness, and it would be sure to eliminate all of one's negative thoughts or feelings. I wish I could see it someday.
Lucario are the true beings of aura, and have the ability of bending aura completely to their will. They are around twice the size of a Riolu in height and have three spikes growing out of their bodies. The abilities of Lucario are of a much higher margin than the abilities of a Riolu. They are more powerful, much wiser and they are given the sacred duty of guarding and protecting the land.
Riolu do not have the capability or power to make an egg. Only Lucario have the ability to make one. An egg is made by two Lucario climbing to the top of the tallest mountain in our area known as "Spear Mountain" named for its shape at the summit. Then they grasp palms and release a strong burst of concentrated aura into the ground. The aura radiates the Lucario's energy, creating the egg.
Our race's average life span is usually around 50 years, but a selected few can live much longer than that, depending on how pure one's heart is. Legend speaks of a Lucario who has learned the path of Immortality. To us, that Lucario is called "Auridia" or "The God of Aura". No one has seen this Lucario, but many try to find it.
My Story
My father gave me the name "Aura" because he said I was special. I don't know about that, but I sure am different. I'm not like all of my friends. I may be a Riolu, but I can never be the same as them.
On the mystical night when all Riolu are meant to hatch, all the Lucario gathered around their eggs, and looked up towards the sun. Once the Solar Eclipse began, the eggs started to glow and slowly became Riolu. I was one of the eggs. Although I did glow, I did not hatch. All the other Riolu hatched and met their parents for the first time. It took three whole days for me to hatch. At first, there was confusion throughout the village. And then, when I finally hatched, there was shock.
I opened my eyes to look up at my parents. They both looked overjoyed, but no one else was. I looked around and saw that everyone else was shocked. I looked at my skin and noticed that I was glowing a magnificent golden colour, different from all of the others. The Riolu that surrounded me were all blue and black. I was really confused at the time. Of course, I was just a new-born, so I did not know much. Some say that I was a gift from The Creator; others think I am a curse upon these lands. But no one knows for sure. Not even I do.
I was raised just like any other Riolu would have been, but everyone seemed to avoid me a little. Every time I walked into the training centre we Riolu are sent to, the other Riolu walked away from me, scared of me. It was confusing and heart-breaking at the same time. The Lucario trained me away from the group too, because the Riolu didn't want me to be with them in case "something happened". This meant I could not develop my skills faster and I was always lagging behind everyone else. Even the Lucario training me were a little scared of me. But my aura was strong. My Father would always tell me "Just because you're different, does not mean you are worse than the others. Never give in to their thoughts, and believe in yourself." My Father always supported me in troubling times.
Once I was two years old, I was finally told by my parents why everyone was scared of me and avoided me. I finally found out that Riolu like me were considered bad luck upon the village, and that I was the first of my kind. Hearing this broke my heart, and I was hiding away for a little while, thinking if I should run away for the village's sake. But I always would remember what my father said, and kept on going. I may not be like the others, but that doesn't mean I can't do what they can do. So, with determination, I kept on going. While the other Riolu were learning new attacks, I was trying to learn the basics. I was always a step behind.
One day, on my fifth birthday, my father decided to take me up Spear Mountain. I love the walk up that mountain. I love the nature and the way the wind blew on my face. It felt amazing. I had never climbed to the top before, but this time I did. When we reached the summit, it was what seemed like a crater in the ground with a ramp on the edge, overlooking the sea. My father walked towards the centre of the crater, and I followed. My father sat down and meditated, and I did too. But when I did, something happened.
My body started glowing and my eyes turned a cyan colour. Then, all of a sudden, I started levitating off the ground. I was panicking, but I was not in control of my body. My father opened his eyes and looked towards me. His face grew pale with fear and shouted something at me, but I couldn't recognize what he was saying. He tried to pull me down, but he got blown away by a wave of energy erupting from me.
After about ten seconds of me floating and my father trying his best to get me down, I clenched my body together and shot a beam of energy from my chest up towards the sky. My father got sent flying into a wall, and even when in pain tried to get me down. Where this power came from was a mystery to me, and still is. As the beam faded, I slowly closed my eyes as my body gently floated down. The last thing I saw was my father running towards me, shocked by what just happened.
I woke up two weeks later with my Mother and Father over me, who both seemed extremely worried and happy that I finally woke up. As I rose, I think I saw many Lucario and Riolu surrounding me, looking shocked. I couldn't see very well though, and I could barely hear a thing, but I think I heard them talking about me. After about a few hours, I finally fully recovered my sight and hearing. I seemed to have caused a lot of panic for the residents of the village. What happened to me? Where did that power come from? I still ask these questions, even today.
It's about a Riolu who was born differently from the rest of his kind, and his closest friend is taken away from him. He needs to learn how to become strong if he is able to face up to the threat which puts the world in danger. It takes place in a new world not mentioned in any other story.
This book was meant to be an idea for a game i wish to create when i'm able to, but i decided to write it as a book. It is quite a big book so far. I believe it is an amazing read for any Lucario/Riolu fan or any pokemon fan. Heck, it is even good for someone who has no clue what pokemon is. In my book, i have not once mentioned the word "Pokemon".
Please give me any comments and criticism you have about my book, good or bad, so i can aim to improve it as much as possible. If you find any mistakes, let me know so i can correct them. I will be writing more daily, so you can expect a few updates to this after around every chapter i write. My book is not even close to being finished, but i would like to get ideas for what i should do next from all of you. If you do choose to read it, then thanks. If you don't, that's fine. Thanks for taking your time to read this, and i hope you choose to read my book! Just scroll down to read it.
P.S. Looking for an illustrator for my book. PM me if you can help, greatly appreciated!
World of Aura
The story so far…
My name is Aura. I am a creature known as a Riolu. But I'm… different from the others. It's a long story. Let me first tell you about my kind.
We Riolu are special creatures who live in the Rukari Mountains, and are gifted in the way of the aura. We can control aura and use it in many unimaginable ways. For example, we can sense the feelings of all living things, we can turn aura into energy which can be used for fighting or recovery, we can create plant life from nothing and many more amazing things. I'm not too good at growing things though.
Riolu all hatch from their eggs on a rare occurrence, once the moon blocks the sun. Or as my Father calls it, a Solar Eclipse. This is when the aura becomes the strongest it can possibly be, and is visible to all. A ceremony takes place once the Riolu hatch to welcome the new life into the world. However, this ceremony only occurs once every 20 years.
Riolu are naturally blue and black, and all look alike in a natural way. We can tell each other apart though by the feeling of each other's aura, or if we decide to wear different things like a flower or a scarf. I don't need to wear any of these things because… well… I'm kind of easy to spot out in a crowd.
Once Riolu find their one true soul-mate, they can change form to what is traditionally known by the name of "Lucario". This evolutionary change can only be made once the sun is in the sky and two Riolu hold true friendship. It is often done in groups, but not always. A group of Riolu would wake up early, just before sunrise, and find a clear view of the sky. Then, they would meditate next to their partner, holding hands, and wait for the sun to rise. Apparently, it is a brilliant sight to witness, and it would be sure to eliminate all of one's negative thoughts or feelings. I wish I could see it someday.
Lucario are the true beings of aura, and have the ability of bending aura completely to their will. They are around twice the size of a Riolu in height and have three spikes growing out of their bodies. The abilities of Lucario are of a much higher margin than the abilities of a Riolu. They are more powerful, much wiser and they are given the sacred duty of guarding and protecting the land.
Riolu do not have the capability or power to make an egg. Only Lucario have the ability to make one. An egg is made by two Lucario climbing to the top of the tallest mountain in our area known as "Spear Mountain" named for its shape at the summit. Then they grasp palms and release a strong burst of concentrated aura into the ground. The aura radiates the Lucario's energy, creating the egg.
Our race's average life span is usually around 50 years, but a selected few can live much longer than that, depending on how pure one's heart is. Legend speaks of a Lucario who has learned the path of Immortality. To us, that Lucario is called "Auridia" or "The God of Aura". No one has seen this Lucario, but many try to find it.
My Story
My father gave me the name "Aura" because he said I was special. I don't know about that, but I sure am different. I'm not like all of my friends. I may be a Riolu, but I can never be the same as them.
On the mystical night when all Riolu are meant to hatch, all the Lucario gathered around their eggs, and looked up towards the sun. Once the Solar Eclipse began, the eggs started to glow and slowly became Riolu. I was one of the eggs. Although I did glow, I did not hatch. All the other Riolu hatched and met their parents for the first time. It took three whole days for me to hatch. At first, there was confusion throughout the village. And then, when I finally hatched, there was shock.
I opened my eyes to look up at my parents. They both looked overjoyed, but no one else was. I looked around and saw that everyone else was shocked. I looked at my skin and noticed that I was glowing a magnificent golden colour, different from all of the others. The Riolu that surrounded me were all blue and black. I was really confused at the time. Of course, I was just a new-born, so I did not know much. Some say that I was a gift from The Creator; others think I am a curse upon these lands. But no one knows for sure. Not even I do.
I was raised just like any other Riolu would have been, but everyone seemed to avoid me a little. Every time I walked into the training centre we Riolu are sent to, the other Riolu walked away from me, scared of me. It was confusing and heart-breaking at the same time. The Lucario trained me away from the group too, because the Riolu didn't want me to be with them in case "something happened". This meant I could not develop my skills faster and I was always lagging behind everyone else. Even the Lucario training me were a little scared of me. But my aura was strong. My Father would always tell me "Just because you're different, does not mean you are worse than the others. Never give in to their thoughts, and believe in yourself." My Father always supported me in troubling times.
Once I was two years old, I was finally told by my parents why everyone was scared of me and avoided me. I finally found out that Riolu like me were considered bad luck upon the village, and that I was the first of my kind. Hearing this broke my heart, and I was hiding away for a little while, thinking if I should run away for the village's sake. But I always would remember what my father said, and kept on going. I may not be like the others, but that doesn't mean I can't do what they can do. So, with determination, I kept on going. While the other Riolu were learning new attacks, I was trying to learn the basics. I was always a step behind.
One day, on my fifth birthday, my father decided to take me up Spear Mountain. I love the walk up that mountain. I love the nature and the way the wind blew on my face. It felt amazing. I had never climbed to the top before, but this time I did. When we reached the summit, it was what seemed like a crater in the ground with a ramp on the edge, overlooking the sea. My father walked towards the centre of the crater, and I followed. My father sat down and meditated, and I did too. But when I did, something happened.
My body started glowing and my eyes turned a cyan colour. Then, all of a sudden, I started levitating off the ground. I was panicking, but I was not in control of my body. My father opened his eyes and looked towards me. His face grew pale with fear and shouted something at me, but I couldn't recognize what he was saying. He tried to pull me down, but he got blown away by a wave of energy erupting from me.
After about ten seconds of me floating and my father trying his best to get me down, I clenched my body together and shot a beam of energy from my chest up towards the sky. My father got sent flying into a wall, and even when in pain tried to get me down. Where this power came from was a mystery to me, and still is. As the beam faded, I slowly closed my eyes as my body gently floated down. The last thing I saw was my father running towards me, shocked by what just happened.
I woke up two weeks later with my Mother and Father over me, who both seemed extremely worried and happy that I finally woke up. As I rose, I think I saw many Lucario and Riolu surrounding me, looking shocked. I couldn't see very well though, and I could barely hear a thing, but I think I heard them talking about me. After about a few hours, I finally fully recovered my sight and hearing. I seemed to have caused a lot of panic for the residents of the village. What happened to me? Where did that power come from? I still ask these questions, even today.
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