Xatoku's Fakemon Dex

[Xatoku]

Xatoku's Fakemon Dex ~ C+C NEEDED!!!

Hey guys, I'm gonna be making a new Pokemon Hack soon called Pokemon Dazing Dawn, which will have a whole messload (over 150) new Pokemon!

Note, these are my very first Pokemon sprites but be harsh and CnC is highly appreciated!:D

#1
Rooseed

Spoiler:

V1

V2

#2
Embruff

Spoiler:

V1

V2

#3,4,5
Finray,Manscythe,Sharpray

Spoiler:

#18
Falder

Spoiler:

V1

#23

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[Ben.]

these are good i like roopseed i think his evo's should be fire cus he kinda reminds me of a bomb XD

 

[Domin-8]

Hmmm....check spoiler

Spoiler:

Need to work on the outline on this one. It is too light where it should be dark. Good shading and line work. Good sprite

Not bad the tail outline is a little wonky, maybe make it even all the way, it gets fat around the part where it bends. Work on the outline on this one too. It is too dark where it should be lighter. Maybe add another shade too. And I don't understand the shading around the nose.

Not bad. Again outline needs some work. And maybe shade the outline of the eyes so it looks apart of the body not pasted on.


So to finish, look at the sprites from the game to get a feel for shading outlines. Great job man.

 

[Xatoku]

these are good i like roopseed i think his evo's should be fire cus he kinda reminds me of a bomb XD

Well because he's the grass starter, his line will be grass lol.

 

[Sleepwalker]

I like Embruff. He looks like the kind that evolves into some savage beast. It could use a little work (shading), but all in all, it looks good.

 

[Xatoku]

Alright I updated them a little bit, colours, shades, and overall look on some.

C+C!!

 

[Kyouya]

even though i usaully dont like fire pokemon embruff looks cool

 

[Sleepwalker]

The new Finram is nice, way better than the original. Rooseed lookes better, I like the eyes more on the new one. And I still like Embruff.

 

[ForeverRed]

Is it me or Embruff looks like Water Trainer's fire starter?

 

[Xatoku]

I kind of based it off of the his starter,Vulpix, and Poochyena.

 

[Xatoku]

Here's #18, Falder!!! Shh I stole Torchic's eyes, kinda.

 

[Sleepwalker]

Falder looks like Natu to me, but it has its differences.

Tyrex, the outlines on it are a little bit too dark. I think the horns could be redone a little too. It doesn't show how they grow out of its head.

 

[Bloodmoon]

Nice sprites! The dinosaur could be redone a little, but still. There good sprites.

I like how Falder reminds me of a mixture of most of the bird's 1st stages I've seen, (Except pidgey and hoothoot).

The dog is cool, I like the fire dark starter idea. The only thing I don't understand is the fire. It looks too odd on him. I like the tail more.

The Finram is good, nice lines. The Rooseed reminds me of how a cherry would be if green. And it does look like a bomb, but thats an added bonus.

 

[Xatoku]

Nice sprites! The dinosaur could be redone a little, but still. There good sprites.

I like how Falder reminds me of a mixture of most of the bird's 1st stages I've seen, (Except pidgey and hoothoot).

The dog is cool, I like the fire dark starter idea. The only thing I don't understand is the fire. It looks too odd on him. I like the tail more.

The Finram is good, nice lines. The Rooseed reminds me of how a cherry would be if green. And it does look like a bomb, but thats an added bonus.

That was perfect CnC thanks alot, I'll get to all of those problems today ^_^.

 

[Xatoku]

Hey there kids :D. Meet Manscythe.

Personally, I think he came out amazing,nohomo. I got the position perfect,and the shading IMO looks great. Only thing I may fix is the tail. If the lines on his back seem uneven, don't worry, I fixed it, but that will be in the update for Guilloray.

 

[Aljam]

Embruf V1 is awesome! Tyrex looks like it need some dithering where the leg and body meet.

 

[Xatoku]

Wow they look really good! Ive seen some fakemon and they really look badly made and actually look fake but these look really good. Id love to see them in a game.

They will be in a game :D.

And thanks a bunch that really means alot.

 

[Laprasas7]

Tyrex Pose is so Cool :) They look great ^_^

 

[Xatoku]

Tyrex Pose is so Cool :) They look great ^_^

Thanks but sadly that Tyrex will be completely redone hehe.

All done, tell me what you think: