[YGO] Aliens - Another Try?

[Apple Juice]

This is basically the same build I posted back in May, but not that many people critted, and I've been thinking about actually building this, so C&C is necessary. ~PLEASE NOTE~ I don't take suggestions that say I should go with a different deck. I run what I want to run. Deal with it; and critisize what I have for you.

ANYWAYS, here is an intro, and then the build. Enjoy!

Intro
Hey everyone, It's me, Apple Juice, and if you may or may not have noticed, I'm back with a new build I've been working on! This one focuses on the archetype Aliens (reptile-type archetype). Their main strategy is relying heavily on "A-Counters" and removing them by card effects to activate them. Out of all these cards, the only ones I don't have are Alien Mother, 2 more Cosmic Fortress, 1 more Alien Kid, and Alien Brain.

THE BUILD
Monsters

Alien Ammonite x3
Alien Dog x3
Alien Grey
Alien Kid x2
Alien Mars
Alien Mother
Alien Warrior x3
Alien Overlord x2
Alien Psychic
Alien Telepath x2
Alien Hunter x3
Honest
Oshaleon

Spells

"A" Cell Breeding Device
"A" Cell Incubator
Brain Control
Burden of the Mighty x2
Code A Ancient Ruins x2
Molting Escape
Mysterious Triangle x2
Swords of Revealing Light
Viper's Rebirth

Traps

Alien Brain
Brainwashing Beam
Cell Explosion Virus
Crop Circles
Damage = Reptile
Detonator Circle "A"
Mass Hypnosis
Offering to the Snake Deity x2
Planet Pollutant Virus x2
Solemn Warning x2

Extra Deck

Cosmic Fortress Gol'gar x3
Ancient Sacred Wyvern

 

[Nightstalker]

sorry apple juice but im not to sure about how to criticise a deck i dont know. however i have noticed that you have 2 solemn judgements which [ unless youre playing ocg ] is not allowed, i dont suppose you meant to put solemn warning instead did you?

 

[Apple Juice]

Oh, you're right. Thanks for pointing that out! I did mean Warning.

 

[Cirrus]

Honest is awesome. Run 2.

Run Solemn Judgment, Mirror Force, Torrential Tribute, Bottomless Trap Hole, and so on, leaving behind only Offering, Planet Pollutant, and Solemn Warning...

So the Trap lineup would look like this.

2 Bottomless Trap Hole
2 Solemn Warning
2 Offering to the Snake Deity
2 Planet Pollutant Virus
1 Solemn Judgment
1 Mirror Force
1 Torrential Tribute

As for the Spells... most of them are a little unnecessary.

3 Book of Moon
3 Code A Ancient Ruins
2 Burden of the Mighty
1 Dark Hole
1 Monster Reborn

Would look better. This would leave you only 19 monster slots, however, so you might consider running 1 less Code A Ancient Ruins or not running Burden at all.

The monster selection is up to you.

Honestly, I would actually possibly cut the two Planet Pollutants as well (or at least one of the two), but they're fine as they are, and I haven't tested, so I can't say for sure.