yugioh spellcaster deck?

[Relevant]

Erm, hi guys. Here's a deck I threw together. crit please? (advacned format)

Monsters:
WItch's Apprentice x3
Summoner Monk
Chaos COmmand Magician x2
Dark Magician
Skilled Dark magician x3
Cyber Jar x2
White Magician pikeru
royal Magci Library

Spells:
Mystical Space Typhoon x3
Smashing Ground x2
Fissure x2
Diffusion wave motion x2
Magicians Unite
Magical Blast
Monster Reborn
Pot of Greed

Traps:

Trap Hole
Mirror Force x2
Solemn Judgement x3

END. (not that great with yugioh :O)

 

[Apple Juice]

*cracks knuckles* Let's get started. :D

First of all, I'll crit your monsters. You seem to have no 'plan', plot, or anything. It kind of seems like you put some spellcasters in a deck, bro. D: First of all, who needs that many Witchs? Cyber Jars are out of place and banned, and it seems this is in advanced format. You also probably need some more powerful support, like Endiymon. Also, a Blast Magician would be nice in this deck as well. Apprentice Magician, Crystal Seer, etc. would fit in. You definitely need a Magical Marionette. :/

Onto Spells. If you're going to run Dark Magician/Skilled Dark Magician (which, in a normal spellcasters deck you shouldn't), then you also need Dark Magician Girl, Dark Magician of Chaos, and Dark Magic Curtain. These support cards help all dark magicians get on the field. (this is only if you want to run dark magician) You cannot have any Monster Reborns in an advanced deck, and only one Smashing Ground. Only one Mystical Space Typhoon; I think there's a limit for Fissure too, but I'll have to check. You're missing some standard spells like Heavy Storm in there, and Swords of Revealing Light. Also, Pot of Greed is banned. (and I know why from experience ><)

Lastly, Traps. First off, Solemn is limited to one. Mirror Force is limited and Trap Hole is fail. Basically all you need is a Torrential Tribute & Royal Decree, and of course Mirror Force.

I guess that's all. Work a little more on it next time, mmkay? :D