Zinock's latest works

[Zinock]

First two are GIFs,made myself :D

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And these are new sigs, again both which I made. :D

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Im a beginner so I will be happy to get any tips/advice from you guys.
Thanks
-Zinock

 

[Xyrin]

I'm not too good myself but I can see a few things wrong with these...

It's pretty basic and the text gets hard to see when you get to one of the last slides. Could you get the Pokemon to move some?

I like this one better than the other one. The placement of the text is better.

I really like the text on this one. Tbh you shouldn't put the render in the middle. Not exactly diggin' the blurred and smudged image.

Oh my. I just don't like this one.The background is nice but the text just ruins it. It's light on light. You should never do that and you can barely read it. It would look better red, blue or black.

You should also learn C4D's because it makes your gfx so much better. And your renders should blend into the background better. It looks like a render pasted onto a background (I understand it's hard for newbies to do this but you can manage)