Zippie's stuff

[Zippie]

Hey there, I'm Zippie and I draw a lot. Enough with me, here are some of my garbage. Critique is accepted and appreciated. : )

WARNING: The images are BIG!!

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This was more of a test-out picture since I got my new tablet pen at the time. Also, I was testing out the "noir" style eversince I read Sin City and watched some old movies, so this is really more of a practice picture.

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I love the Red Hot Chili Peppers, and I love PokeSpe. I thought "Hey, why not mix them both?" and poof. I know their hair seems so "smooth" and not silky like they're supposed to be. And Yellow looks a bit awkward. : (
Based off the Blood Sugar Sex Magik album cover.
Left: Green
Top: Blue
Right: Red
Bottom: Yellow

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Just a rough sketch of Dawn playing a 1962 Fender Stratocaster. I know she looks too stiff here and her legs are somewhat big for an 11 year old. I never got around to finish it but I might.

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I'm an Oldrivalshipper. So this is, scarily, Green and Blue except older. I know Green's anatomy is all messed up, since his right hand seems so small and his left shoulder is not as big as his right. And Blue looks like a hooker. :P

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Yes, that's Red in his late 20s. *shot*

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WIP! My latest picture. That's the PokeSpe' Gen1 trio in their late 20s again. It's still a draft since you can see the hair and clothes aren't shaded in yet. Blue's hat is tilted on purpose. xD

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A stupid 10 minute drawing and a horrible inside joke gone wrong.

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Another stupid 5 minute drawing. If you play Team Fortress 2, you'll get the joke.

WARNING: PG-14. But nothing naughty is showing! D:
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Oh boy, as an Oldrivalshipper, I cannot help but to draw this... I should stop reading Sin City because it seems like I'm pulling a Tarentino. WHY IS GREEN SO BUFF?!

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P.S. I am really sorry if I ruined Oldrivalshipping for you.
P.P.S. I am also really sorry if I ruined Blue's image for you by making her a horrible chain smoker.

 

[Haz]

Review below:

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Looks like an older Dawn, oh wait that's what it's meant be :P The Pokeball ruins it with the red. If you stayed in the Grey scale it would look much better.

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I like the faces around it but maybe if you drew the Pokemon (can't remember its name) in the same style as the people, it may have looked better.

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The legs are a bit thick like you said but she can be an older dawn.

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The atomny isn't that messed up, I really like this one good job :)

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You didn't do so good on this one.

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It's good for a draft I love it

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So is that a Teddiursa suit?.

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I don't get the joke but anyway...

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I love this, my fave pic. You should do more like this (don't worry I'm 15 so I'm used to seeing stuff like this)

You have lots of talent. I'm not very good at reviewing so you can either ignore me or humor me

 

[3749374]

Wow you are so very talented!! Are these all digitally drawn??
I think they are amazing theres not a whole lot of bad i can say! maybe add just a dash of colour in a well placed area to make the pics stand out. A bit like they did in Sin-City

 

[Zippie]

Review below:

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You didn't do so good on this one.

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So is that a Teddiursa suit?.

1st - I'm just curious on the image. How do you think I can make it better?

2nd - No, that's a.... Oh man, I really don't want to say it... But it's a Pedobear suit. *shot*

Thanks for the critique. I keep putting the Guitar Dawn aside but I might finish it and make her legs thinner. ; )

Wow you are so very talented!! Are these all digitally drawn??
I think they are amazing theres not a whole lot of bad i can say! maybe add just a dash of colour in a well placed area to make the pics stand out. A bit like they did in Sin-City

Yeah. I drew them all on my tablet. I was thinking of adding color to the R/G/B trio but I didn't know where, unless you can help me. : (

And thank you to both. : )

 

[Circa]

All of those picture are all hard-worked art-works. It seems you tried your best to do those artworks you showed us. And i like them alot.
Anyways. Some suggestions:

About the 1st Picture - Look at it's feet/legs. It seems ugly. =/. Never like it.
About the 2nd Picture - Love it. It's black and white. But why did you add Roserade and those flowers surronding the characters?. If you would add them. I suggest make them black and white aswell.
About the 3rd Picture - It's Dawn! And it's pretty. But those hair doesn't fit her. You should've make it darker to show it's true hair right?
About the 4th Picture - It's awesome! I think there is nothing to fix up in this image. Good. =]
About the 5th Picture - Seems good. But the leg part again. It's black. It seems it doesn't have any legs. I suggest you should make the legs white right? But i think it's your style.
About the 6th Picture - Nothing to suggest. It's pretty good.
About the 7th Picture - Her face is too small. It doesn't fit Cynthia. =/. Another one the body and the shoulder. It's too big. =/
About the 8th Picture - Lol! Look at Dawn. Anyways. It looks good.

Hope my suggestions helped.

 

[Vednix]

Some are odd, some are cool and some are plain disturbing. Overall, very good artistry there.

 

[ShinjisLover]

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The way you drew the Poké Ball doesn't make it look round. Also, the fingers grasping in the Poké Ball could've been better-looking.

This picture weirds me out. . Anyway, outlining lips is never attractive, so I just wouldn't do it in general. Also, the picture of Roselia is copy/paste and completely ruins the picture.

I don't really like this one at all. Perhaps it's because it's a sketch, or maybe because it's Dawn. I haven't chosen my reason yet. XD

And, again, outlining lips is never attractive.

Both of their heads are too long. And, when you're able to see their ears, they look like they're facing us, rather than facing away from us. Both hands also need to be bigger. Their hands should be as big as their face.

I have no issues with this other than just not liking it in general. But that's my personal preference.

Same with this one as it was above.

The face is much too long. Also, I'm having problems with the nose. It just looks like the nostrils are in the wrong spot because of how you shaded it. And, again, outlining lips is never attractive.

Yay! Someone finally shot Piplup! That Steelix is *****in', too, excellently drawn. Piplup needs work as, how you've drawn it, makes it look like its face is lop-sided. Also, Dawn looks hunchbacked.

Yes, why is Green so buff? It's really rather creepy. . And, again, the heads are too long.

My review ^. I have to say, your drawing style is very. . Well, bad. It's not attractive at all, to be honest. =/ Not a very fun review.
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[Zippie]

All of those picture are all hard-worked art-works. It seems you tried your best to do those artworks you showed us. And i like them alot.
Anyways. Some suggestions:

About the 2nd Picture - Love it. It's black and white. But why did you add Roserade and those flowers surronding the characters?. If you would add them. I suggest make them black and white aswell.
About the 3rd Picture - It's Dawn! And it's pretty. But those hair doesn't fit her. You should've make it darker to show it's true hair right?
About the 5th Picture - Seems good. But the leg part again. It's black. It seems it doesn't have any legs. I suggest you should make the legs white right? But i think it's your style.
About the 7th Picture - Her face is too small. It doesn't fit Cynthia. =/. Another one the body and the shoulder. It's too big. =/

Hope my suggestions helped.

- 2nd - It's a parody of the RHCP's Blood "Sugar Sex Magik" album. I just wanted to change the faces while leaving the other roses (except the middle one) alone.
Original album cover here: https://sleevage.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/08/rhcp_bssm.jpg

- 3rd - Yeah, I didn't bother finishing to shade the hair, but when it's finished (which I don't know when), the hair would be darker.

- 5th - He's wearing an giant overcoat which coves his legs, that's why there's barely any clothing folds toward the bottom. Come to think of it, the right (our left) side of his coat is too long, so I was thinking of shortening the length and shade his pants like you said.

- 7th - She's basically wearing a mascot outfit and those things are pretty bulky in general. But please explain on why is the face too small, is it the eyes, the nose, etc.?
Person in a mascot costume as seen here: https://www.alincocostumes.com/catalog/images/606Grizzley%20Bear.jpg


But thanks for the critique.

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The way you drew the Poké Ball doesn't make it look round. Also, the fingers grasping in the Poké Ball could've been better-looking.​

This picture weirds me out. . Anyway, outlining lips is never attractive, so I just wouldn't do it in general. Also, the picture of Roselia is copy/paste and completely ruins the picture.​

I don't really like this one at all. Perhaps it's because it's a sketch, or maybe because it's Dawn. I haven't chosen my reason yet. XD​

And, again, outlining lips is never attractive.​

Both of their heads are too long. And, when you're able to see their ears, they look like they're facing us, rather than facing away from us. Both hands also need to be bigger. Their hands should be as big as their face.​

I have no issues with this other than just not liking it in general. But that's my personal preference.​

Same with this one as it was above.​

The face is much too long. Also, I'm having problems with the nose. It just looks like the nostrils are in the wrong spot because of how you shaded it. And, again, outlining lips is never attractive.​

Yay! Someone finally shot Piplup! That Steelix is *****in', too, excellently drawn. Piplup needs work as, how you've drawn it, makes it look like its face is lop-sided. Also, Dawn looks hunchbacked.​

Yes, why is Green so buff? It's really rather creepy. . And, again, the heads are too long.​

My review ^. I have to say, your drawing style is very. . Well, bad. It's not attractive at all, to be honest. =/ Not a very fun review.​

(Note: I deleted my pictures from this spoiler because they took up so much space)

>And, when you're able to see their ears, they look like they're facing us, rather than facing away from us. Both hands also need to be bigger
- You can see someone's ears if the back of their head is facing you. Green's doesn't have any hair covering his ears and Blue's hair tied up. Also, if you're talking about their hands when they're both holding them together, yes, I know they're small, but if you're talking Blue's right hand holding the cigarette, her hand is scrunch up so naturally it looks smaller.
Back of the head: https://farm4.static.flickr.com/3190/2795969683_64283f952d.jpg
https://img2.timeinc.net/people/i/2007/stylewatch/blog/070430/david_arquette_400x300.jpg
https://www.medicalacupuncture.org/assets/images/0303_ZHAO_art.fig2.jpg

>Also, I'm having problems with the nose. It just looks like the nostrils are in the wrong spot because of how you shaded it.
- The very tip of a person's nose is a tiny sphere so I just shaded the tip only. That is, if you're confusing it with the shade under a person's nose, where it's darker, of course.
Woman's face: https://wwwdelivery.superstock.com/WI/223/1647/PreviewComp/SuperStock_1647R-127062.jpg

I don't want to sound aggressive so no offense or anything, but I've seen you review other people's work and you did a good job, but my review just mainly sounds like "I don't like it just because your style is weird" type of thing. Yes, I see some mistakes you pointed out in some pictures and I appreciate that but telling me to not outline the lips just sounds like you want to me to change my style just for your preferences. Plenty of artists outline the lips because they're naturally darker than the human skin. It will just look weird having no lips in general... *shudders* But I guess that's just your preferences.

Well if that's the case, then my sincere apologies about having a strange style. My main influences (and idols) are Frank Miller, Raneman and Jo-Chen. I idolize them because I want to avoid the whole "Anime/Manga" look and give it the more "Realistic/Cartoony (or mine is more cartoony than realistic)" look. But again, I'm perfectly fine that you don't enjoy it but saying it's outright bad and unattractive doesn't help me at all... So I'll let you decide, is there a way to make my style look better?

And I know the long face thing is really a weird habit I have and I do have trouble trying to fix it. :P

 

[3749374]

Yeah. I drew them all on my tablet. I was thinking of adding color to the R/G/B trio but I didn't know where, unless you can help me. : (

And thank you to both. : )

Possibly the hair, Accesories such as scarves & ties etc.

Then again i'm not the artist

 

[manhattan]

OH MY GOD.
SIN CITY + POKÉMON = YOU ARE A GENIUS.

I LOVE YOU.

And now, seriously:
You are pretty darn talented. I like it a lot, especially since I support OldRivalShipping :D

(Although I may have lol'ed at the Incredible Buffness Of Awesome.)
(And I most certaily laughed at the EPIC PEDOBEAR COSTUME!)