Zirk's Words

Zirkle38

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    My Real Imaginary Friend

    I talk to you all the time
    And you answer me
    You help me when I need it
    And God do I need it
    But when I reach out for you,
    You're not there
    Then I realize you never were
    And you never will be,
    That's when you stop talking to me.
    All night I lie awake
    And wonder what I did wrong
    Maybe you never loved me all along,
    But do I deserve this?
    This hurt, this pain,
    Over something that never happened
    It seems so childish now
    Our little fight
    I just want you to know,
    You were right.
    I think I've forgotten how to laugh
    All of my smiles are forced.
    But the tears come more frequently
    And they don't stop
    I'm so sick of pretending
    Pretending I don't love you,
    Pretending I'm alright.
    But I do love you,
    And I'm not alright.


    Just One More

    I shake the lighter
    My grip gets tighter.
    I've used all my fluid lighting bobby pins
    Then burning my skin.
    I grab my pencil
    And dig it into my leg
    That's when I pull
    My granite based blade.
    I carved these letters a thousand times
    A crude T
    A lopsided W
    I always think that's the last one
    But it never is
    The pain from these scars
    Remind me of the pain you left
    It's the only way I can be close to you again.

    Bahh. Not too great, but I feel like having my work evaluated (:
     
    Something New

    I was crying over him,
    When I met you
    You were a best friend to me,
    And I was your best friend too.
    Then one day,
    my dreams of him,
    faded away
    And I started to dream of you.
    This friendship is such a bore
    Now that I want something more
    So I'll take a chance,
    We can have our own exotic dance
    And I'll take you as my own
    To cherish, love,
    And to hold.


    So here's something I whipped up to surmise my life as of now. I suppose this is my own little love blog, written in poem form. Anyways, critiques and comments are always appreciated (:
     
    My Real Imaginary Friend was a very fresh poem to read. I liked it.

    Just One More may not be your best, but it's still very decent.

    Something New is definitely an inspiration for those who seek someone to offer his love to.
     
    TJGamer; Thank you (:
    When I write, I try to have my own voice, and offer something new or different,
     
    Gardenia101; Thank you very much (:
    I'd have to say Just One More isn't one of my favorites either, haha.
     
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