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This is something I started a while ago, and I stopped. I need more opinions wether to start again or not.
It's a prolouge, but it's not really a traditional one. I wanted to write out somethign quickly. (I was running low on time when I first wrote this part)
Also, I wanted a lot of foreshadowing. Which is what you get.
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June 17, 1993-Portland, Maine
"Congratulations, Mrs. Neighbor, it's a baby boy!" The doctor said joyfully.
When they brought the baby home, they began to notice something strange. Every now and then, it would zone out. It would stop crying or laughing and he would be totally silent. After this pause, he would resume his usual noisemaking as if nothing had ever happened. When he leaned to crawl, he seemed to be two places at once. He would crawl so quickly, that they would have to watch him constantly. By the time he knew colors, he couldn't stop looking at the color yellow. At first, they didn't think it was very strange. The boy acted strange, and he continuously zoned out. He never could remember what happened when he zoned out, and it began to bother him.
He lived his life as normally as he could, until one day, late November.
November 29, 1992-Mesa, Arizona
"It's a boy! Congratulations Mrs. Underwood. I'll send your husband in." The doctor kindly said.
The baby was brought home, and it seemed normal, except for one thing. Every few days, he would become completely silent. Besides that, he lived a good life up until he was 13. On his birthday in the year 2005, everything changed forever. His life would never be the same. He would never live the good life that he had lived before. His life would forever become intertwined with another, and would only be let go when They were defeated.
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Basically, this part is to explain the "Who", "What", "When", "Where", and "Why" of Zodiac.
WHO-This story is about two boys who go from leading normal lives, to leading an attack against an organization without a name. In the story, Someone might say, "I can't believe that They're coming." or, "You'll have to face Them!" When they say this, I'll be very sure not to make a typo. I'll always and only capitilize these words, and others like it if I'm referring to the organization.
WHAT-It revolves all sorts of signs, including Indian Spirit Animals, Chinese Zodiac, Nordic Mythology, Atrologic Signs, and other stuff like that.
WHEN-The story takes place around our time period, specifically, 2003.
WHERE-The story starts in Arizona and Maine, and extends to other places, mainly to the origins of the Zodiac.
WHY-This story will hopefully make you think about real life, as once it gets to be quite a few chapters long you should start to realize that its a play on real life society.
OTHER NOTES-Zodiac is very heavily written with an omnicient narraotr. I wanted to give it an almost godly feel, as if a higher power was telling the story to someone. Each chapter will consist of at least one date, which as the story progresses, will affect the certain happenings.
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I'd love some critique, and I really NEED opinions weather to quit or keep going.