Dude, Astinus was only being blunt because she did something called a review, where she examines your fiction and tells you how to IMPROVE your writing, not falsely glorify it when it obviously needs work. All reviewers have to be blunt; it's part of their job description. Besides, everyone on this forum receives a review like that at least once; it's not like you were singled out or anything. Also, a lot of people did tell you to fix the font, since bolding everything tires the eyes after a while. I won't lie, you had a good concept, but your execution was not exactly sound. Give writing another shot and see what people say about it.