UberChomp

No problem; everyone has an off day.

not 100% on the level, but they both have this moveset Dragon Claw, Stone Edge & Dragon dance. But Garchomp has Fire Fang and Mence has EQ. I think I shud give them Outrage...

Oh, I was just saying... I didn't mean I worked to the goal on that, I just happened to see that I did 200 posts...

NM, but guess who just bagged himself a Shiny EV'd Garchomp & a Shiny EV'd Salamence.... ME!

Hey hows it goin?
What time is it for you at the moment

I have posted over 200 posts!

LOL I am too cya 2moz! (which will probably be later 2day for me but anyays)

I dont know, who were you talking bout?

Wait... Which guy? That Jess308 kid?

So interested again? .

Well, thank you again! Oh..wait, thank you AGAIN for that post chatting session we had yesterday. I had a really cool time^_^"!

I have watched it over 17 times... Evey time I visit your profile.

I like your video, excellent well made video. Hehe.

Oh my gosh yesss..
xD
Yet very perverted.
xDD

Okay!^^ Same with me! Pm me if you have a question.

Thanks uberchomp!^^ Here I sent you a friend request, there you go!

You want to be my friend? You seem nice.

What gave you the thought that I am awesome, nice, cool or such?

Well, just keep the club alive & thriving alright?
(P.S.-I'm not cool...^_^"!)

Dude, Astinus was only being blunt because she did something called a review, where she examines your fiction and tells you how to IMPROVE your writing, not falsely glorify it when it obviously needs work. All reviewers have to be blunt; it's part of their job description. Besides, everyone on this forum receives a review like that at least once; it's not like you were singled out or anything. Also, a lot of people did tell you to fix the font, since bolding everything tires the eyes after a while. I won't lie, you had a good concept, but your execution was not exactly sound. Give writing another shot and see what people say about it.