dud190 said:
I feel like... My posts aren't interesting enough to read. What can I do to make my posts more fascinating. Descriptions, details? I don't know what to do.
Dud. I'm going to be very straightforward with you right now, and I'm doing so because I genuinely want you to do well here:
You're cutting it
this close beyond the end of your 8 day posting cycle, having not been dependent on another character's action to proceed since that time. Now is
not the time to act self-consciously over something trivial.
If you really are so concerned about "uninteresting" posts, it has nothing to do with how you dress it up, my friend. It has
everything to do with what actions are taken in the post. Character posts like Orx's Druag and Kiyo (formerly Collector Elwood)'s Cicaro are not "fascinating" because the writers themselves have an advanced hold on language. It is because their posts either build on actions that progress the story in their own way, or develops their character when they cannot. Xtrashy's posts for Spora are not by comparison so literary, but that is a combination of her style of writing and her character, who is chronically indifferent and matter-of-fact, two things she has combined very well that plays that gets her character clear cut across.
Amaryllis has told Benicle over a week ago on the IC to go into the office and get Rina's medicine, because
a character is choking to death. These were clear instructions. Your character is an Ninjask, which is
the second fastest Pokemon to date, behind Speed Deoxys; Benicle's personality is supposed to be rash with an annoyance in being told he's wrong,
wanting to make himself some friends, and has the ultimate goal of learning to become a more well-rounded citizen so that his old town can accept him back from exile. If you cannot imagine how your character will fulfill his task in this situation, you need to sit down and play Benicle as you wrote him to be and stick to it. Your character is a giant wealth of untapped potential. Benicle as a character is far from underwhelming.
Kiyo has been trying to get in touch with you in the past week for a collaborative post for Benicle's encounter with Cicaro for the medicine. He tells me he has not been successful in getting anything out of you. Now you just do not have the time to, especially since Kiyo went ahead and posted three or four days ago without you, as he should have.
I have nothing else to tell you, Dud. What I have advised you to do is nothing new, as I already told you all of this after concern with your last post. You need to make a post before this deadline.