I'm not as think as you drunk I am~
Like this
http://i49.tinypic.com/alkfio.png
The best out of the ones up there, though the effect might be a little too sharp. but still good.
http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss8/ComeClairty/Taggy.png
This is very empty, it's a hard stock to use, much easier for vertical tags but yeah, there really isn't enough going on in a major way to fill the space, you're just decorating it.
http://i46.tinypic.com/2vhysg7.png
In this, well, two focals is pretty hard to pull off, and I don't think you're quite there.
To do so, you have to make sure nothing else, literally nothing else can grab attention away from them, and in this the focals are a bit messy, making them fade into the background a bit too much and not stand out.