Return of the Teams

This is my first attempt at a sprite comic so please criticize as much as necessary

Comic 1:http://img479.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic6cx.png
Comic 2:http://img488.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic22mt.png
Comic 3:http://img457.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic34lz.png
Comic 4:http://img431.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic46my.png
Comic 5:http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic54ts.png
Comic 6:http://img218.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic67hs.png
Comic 7:http://img484.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic76bl.png
Comic 8:http://img109.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic86az.png

Character bios:

John: 13 years old. He is the last kid from littleroot town to receive his pokemon. He is also Brandon's little brother. His Pokemon: cubone and snorunt
Brandon: 17 years old. He is now the current Pokemon chapion. His Pokemon: Secptile
Mace: 13 years old. Not much is known about him at the time. His pokemon: Elekid, Mareep, and Electirke

Join form:
Name:
Sprite:
If you are a trainer, an aqua, a magma, or a rocket

Thank you everyone from spriter's resource!
Thank you Houndoom1 for Mace sprite
(When other people that have joined characters are introduce in the comics then i''l put them here)

Looks great. Can't wait to see more. :)

looking good but Professor Birch's color of text hurts my eyes! please change it in the next update.. I look forward to seeing more.

I know the hp bar kind of stinks I made it myself

I guess i'll join your comic:


name: mace
Pokemon: Electabuzz, Ampharos, and Manetric.

Houndoom1 said:

I guess i'll join your comic:

name: mace
Pokemon: Electabuzz, Ampharos, and Manetric.

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k you will be in comic 5 and is it okay that u have elikid insead of electabuuz and ect. 4 the others

Edit: comic 5 is up!

I can be nay which one you want
Rocket Form
Name-Kimishima
Pok?mon-Gengar, Hypno, Hitmonlee
A Rocket duh!

Fisherman Form
Name-Fisherman Kimishima
Pok?mon- Huntail, Kingdra, Gyarados
A trainer

Bugcatcher form
Name- Bugcatcher Kimishima
Pok?mon-Ariados, Forretress, Ninjask
A trainer

coreystranick said:

I can be nay which one you want
Rocket Form
Name-Kimishima
Pok?mon-Gengar, Hypno, Hitmonlee
A Rocket duh!

Fisherman Form
Name-Fisherman Kimishima
Pok?mon- Huntail, Kingdra, Gyarados
A trainer

Bugcatcher form
Name- Bugcatcher Kimishima
Pok?mon-Ariados, Forretress, Ninjask
A trainer

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I'll fit the fisher and the rocket in (i'll hold the bugcatcher in reserve 4 later if i need him)
and can i do the same 4 your character's pokemon (make them pre-evolved forms)

If you want to.. I think i may need to resend you that pic. It may be in BMP. I'll attach the PNG version here

The comic is coming great! I like it.

sorry there hasn't been an update i can't get on every-other weekend

Name: Serenity
Sprite: (Improoved sprite)
Team: (Can it go like this?) Former aqua team member and was very well known for her great power, but she got tiered of her daily work and quit.
Pokemon: Molotic, Vaporeon, Gardevoir

Shattered Moon said:

Name: Serenity
Sprite: (Improoved sprite)

Team: (Can it go like this?) Former aqua team member and was very well known for her great power, but she got tiered of her daily work and quit.
Pokemon: Molotic, Vaporeon, Gardevoir

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K, your in!
Comic 8 is up and i'm running out of ideas to introduce people!
coreystranick:since i'm useing all your people what are their names?

I like the comic and all an dthe text under the pannels is big enough but the HP bars eally need to be fixed

Dude that is totla spam, it is against the rules

I agree, don't do that again.

Can people please report any posts that break the rules?

A warning shall be sent to the user.