Return of the Teams

How do you like my first comic?

  • It's looks very promising keep it up!

    Votes: 3 42.9%
  • Some stuff needs to be changed but it looks good.

    Votes: 2 28.6%
  • This is really bad! It needs a lot of work!

    Votes: 1 14.3%
  • It sucks! Never try to make a comic again!

    Votes: 1 14.3%

  • Total voters
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    • Seen Aug 29, 2006
    This is my first attempt at a sprite comic so please criticize as much as necessary

    Comic 1:https://img479.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic6cx.png
    Comic 2:https://img488.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic22mt.png
    Comic 3:https://img457.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic34lz.png
    Comic 4:https://img431.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic46my.png
    Comic 5:https://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic54ts.png
    Comic 6:https://img218.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic67hs.png
    Comic 7:https://img484.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic76bl.png
    Comic 8:https://img109.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spritecomic86az.png

    Character bios:

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    John: 13 years old. He is the last kid from littleroot town to receive his pokemon. He is also Brandon's little brother. His Pokemon: cubone and snorunt
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    Brandon: 17 years old. He is now the current Pokemon chapion. His Pokemon: Secptile
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    Mace: 13 years old. Not much is known about him at the time. His pokemon: Elekid, Mareep, and Electirke

    Join form:
    Name:
    Sprite:
    If you are a trainer, an aqua, a magma, or a rocket

    Thank you everyone from spriter's resource!
    Thank you Houndoom1 for Mace sprite
    (When other people that have joined characters are introduce in the comics then i''l put them here)
     
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    Looks great. Can't wait to see more. :)
     
    looking good but Professor Birch's color of text hurts my eyes! please change it in the next update.. I look forward to seeing more.
     
    I know the hp bar kind of stinks I made it myself
     
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    Houndoom1 said:
    I guess i'll join your comic:

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    name: mace
    Pokemon: Electabuzz, Ampharos, and Manetric.

    k you will be in comic 5 and is it okay that u have elikid insead of electabuuz and ect. 4 the others

    Edit: comic 5 is up!
     
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    I can be nay which one you want
    Rocket Form
    Name-Kimishima
    Pok?mon-Gengar, Hypno, Hitmonlee
    A Rocket duh!

    Fisherman Form
    Name-Fisherman Kimishima
    Pok?mon- Huntail, Kingdra, Gyarados
    A trainer

    Bugcatcher form
    Name- Bugcatcher Kimishima
    Pok?mon-Ariados, Forretress, Ninjask
    A trainer
     
    coreystranick said:
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    I can be nay which one you want
    Rocket Form
    Name-Kimishima
    Pok?mon-Gengar, Hypno, Hitmonlee
    A Rocket duh!

    Fisherman Form
    Name-Fisherman Kimishima
    Pok?mon- Huntail, Kingdra, Gyarados
    A trainer

    Bugcatcher form
    Name- Bugcatcher Kimishima
    Pok?mon-Ariados, Forretress, Ninjask
    A trainer

    I'll fit the fisher and the rocket in (i'll hold the bugcatcher in reserve 4 later if i need him)
    and can i do the same 4 your character's pokemon (make them pre-evolved forms)
     
    If you want to.. I think i may need to resend you that pic. It may be in BMP. I'll attach the PNG version here
     
    sorry there hasn't been an update i can't get on every-other weekend
     
    Name: Serenity
    Sprite: (Improoved sprite)
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    Team: (Can it go like this?) Former aqua team member and was very well known for her great power, but she got tiered of her daily work and quit.
    Pokemon: Molotic, Vaporeon, Gardevoir
     
    Shattered Moon said:
    Name: Serenity
    Sprite: (Improoved sprite)
    [PokeCommunity.com] Return of the Teams
    [PokeCommunity.com] Return of the Teams

    Team: (Can it go like this?) Former aqua team member and was very well known for her great power, but she got tiered of her daily work and quit.
    Pokemon: Molotic, Vaporeon, Gardevoir

    K, your in!
    Comic 8 is up and i'm running out of ideas to introduce people!
    coreystranick:since i'm useing all your people what are their names?
     
    I like the comic and all an dthe text under the pannels is big enough but the HP bars eally need to be fixed
     
    Dude that is totla spam, it is against the rules
     
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